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Reviews for Nights : Etna

By : darkangel98s
  • From ANON - Mel Meiko on October 29, 2006
    This story was great. I liked how you expressed Etna and Laharl's physical "relationship" even though it was obvious he wanted to be with Flonne.
    Harllie X Flonne!lol
    But this story was very good and animated and very in character. The beginning was awesome. Very cool fic.
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  • From ANON - boring on February 07, 2006
    *Yawns* Gaaaay....
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  • From ANON - shadow on February 03, 2006
    great awsome superb and o that was freakin awsome!
    sry thought i would get my point across :)
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  • From ANON - Doust19 on January 15, 2006

    This piece is a little odd, to say the least. The erotic portion of it is titillating and competently written, yet your characterization of the characters themselves seemed so off at the beginning that I assumed the worst. Laharl and Etna seemed extremely out of your character, like crude exaggerations of their personalities at the beginning of the game. Later on, this diminishes, especially with, as I said, the aforementioned competently-written sex.

    Good stuff, but work on not taking TOO many liberties with character personalities, else the reader is thrown off.
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