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Reviews for Tale of the Loyal LOK

By : Row
  • From ANON - Zidane on July 20, 2006
    This fic is teh awesomeness!! i'd definately say this has to be the best LOK fic here.

    may i make a suggestion tho'

    please add some scenes for the other lords!! there's not enough Dumah to go around....

    and here's a wierd tidbit for you guys....Dumah and umah.....get it...wierd!!

    XD
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  • From ANON - delonariel on July 14, 2006
    ...I think You've reached the pinnacle of mary-sueism. If you'd put a bit more work into the basics of the story, or at least gotten a beta reader, this would have been forgiveable.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2006
    A quick spellcheck and a little attention to capitalization mishaps and nonsenisical sentences would do much to improve this fic.
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