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Reviews for Domitus

By : kidavi
  • From ANON - Destructo888 on October 09, 2006
    This is a great story and i totally agree that there is not enough TRISH X DANTE. There my favourite pairing and we should see more of those kind of stories.
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  • From ANON - Deadly shoadws on February 05, 2006
    I am glad you dont mind OOC for writers in the DMC fandom, Kidavi and that you like Remus. He is a good OC. Everyone has different preferences.
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  • From ANON - Rane Aria on February 01, 2006
    Another great chapter! *hanging from her seat waiting for another* If you do leave AFF.net am going to miss your great and wonderful works! I hope you decided to stay! (then again I check you jackpot site alot also ;p)
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  • From ANON - Riotgrrill on February 01, 2006
    Just discovered this story, (and then went and bookmarked your site, since you're sounding kinda fed up, and I want to read MORE).

    Your lack of beta doesn't show hugely in the later chapters - I probably wouldn't have noticed much of a difference other than some misplaced punctuation and the really occasional awkward phrase if it hadn't been pointed out directly.

    As for the content? Dante-torture is a beauiful thing. Well-written Dante-torture is a beautiful and amazingly rare thing. And oh my god, Dante and Trish having moments in a fic with m/m noncon and (what looks like) some Vergil/Dante moments in the future as well?

    Wow. Just wow. All my favourite poisons in one. It's nice to know that there really are writers out there who can handle multigendered content and keep what I liked about the characters in the games intact. (I was beginning to wonder if there was some kind of law against m/m and m/f coexisting in the same fic.)

    I like your worried, protective Trish, your edgy, angry Dante (the phrase that applies here is "in character") and even your non-omnipotent, surprisingly layered OC. I actually want to know what happens and where you're going, and in this fandom, that's a rare thing.

    Hope the review wasn't too long/wanky for your tastes; if you want a deeper crit or a temporary beta, feel free to email me, and, nore importantly, thanks for a yummy, yummy read.



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  • From ANON - Silver Wolf on January 30, 2006
    I like the plot! Althought I'm not sure where it is going yet, I'll have to wait then of course. Keep updating, please.
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  • From ANON - ArioD on January 30, 2006
    well like I say to you in Y-gallery I'm here jejejeh

    I love this chapter as well as the others, and I'l hope the next will be updated sooner ^^

    I want to see Dante kicking Daemon's ass xDDDD

    C'mon I'll be waiting for more!!!
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  • From kidavi on January 28, 2006
    a few reviews have been removed as per someone's request. ^^ sorry, folks. don't want to be stepping on anyone's toes here.
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  • From ANON - Gary STu on January 28, 2006
    Satanic Verses: YOU GO GIRL!

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  • From ANON - Silver Wolf on January 28, 2006
    o.O oooh, I see rape coming.. Or perhaps it is just me.. Ah, poor Dante. ::hugs him:: >< Good thing I wear black, he's covered in blood.
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  • From ANON - Silver Wolf on January 28, 2006
    Yeah, it definitely helps you write, knowing there are people interested. As for Remus, I like him not one bit. Not with Dante anyway. Dante turned into a way OOC non-Dante Dante. Confused? ^_^; RemusxDante = RemusxOC in my opinion. That's just me (ok, and about ten or twenty people somewhere else).
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  • From ANON - Ariseishirou on January 27, 2006
    So far, this fic is incredible! I love your portrayal of Dante, easily one of the best I've seen yet - he comes off as much too soft in many of the fanfics I read, and this fic does justice to his half-demonic nature, like the rest of your fiction. Trish, too, is on track to becoming greatly likeable.

    And at last! A challenging OC, worthy of someone like Dante. I'm intrigued about him already; I can't wait to see where you take this and how you'll reveal it to us. Also looking forward to the hot sex, of course ;3. Give us more Daemon!
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  • From Ultima on January 27, 2006
    Well, pretty good lookin' so far. I'm not usually fond of major OCs, if only because most people don't fit them into their chosen fandom well, but I don't mind this Daemon guy. He's a little TOO "invincible" for my tastes, but I assume it'll all come crashing down at his expense eventually. Well, that's what the "happy ending" would dictate, anyway. We'll just have to see how you choose to progress with and end things.


    - Jen
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  • From ANON - Silver Wolf on January 26, 2006
    Indeed, reviews are slow to come. Pisses you off sometimes, doesn't it? You write so much, and people barely find a few minutes to leave a small message. Keep going. Kidavi's on the move again. Character death.. hmm..
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