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Reviews for Golden Sun: The Hunted

By : Mikaa
  • From ThePairingGuy on December 04, 2008
    First of all, this is nowhere near as awful as The Insanity. Not even a third as bad.

    However, that's not to say that there aren't major problems. First: Felix/Mia. The pairing itself is not to my liking, but what kills me is your explanation for it. "It couldn't be Felix/Sheba, so it had to be either that or Ivan/Mia." What the heck is wrong with you??? Why would you want _any_ of those three absurd pairings? More to the point, why on earth do you need to pair up party members? Why not pair Felix with Karst? Or leave him single? WHY IS IT REQUIRED FOR YOUR STORY TO HAVE A PAIRING THAT MAKES NO SENSE? Think about it.

    Second: "about as believable as a sack of gummy bears being real bears. True, a bad analogy," A bad analogy indeed. You think a pre-industrial society like Weynard has gummy bears? Between this and your "I have to pair up Felix with a girl who he's totally incompatible with", I'm beginning to wonder about your grip on reality.

    Third: "Supression Band (this prevents the use of psynergy)" Wow. Now _that_ is contrived. And you don't even explain how such bands are created. Alex just goes, "Hmmm, you'll kill me if I don't kill you, but the author says I have to take a woman as a slave in every fic he writes. So, presto! I have a magic device that will let me take you as a slave and keep you from killing me!"

    The story starts good, and Igori is an interesting character. However, nothing happens in chapter 4, and chapter 5 makes no sense and has no connection to anything in the story. What a dumb way to end a fic.

    Unlike The Insanity, this story actually _could_ have been good, but thanks to all the problems I've mentioned, it's absolutely terrible.
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