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Reviews for Princess of the Lost Kingdom of Hyrule

By : TBoneTony

From ANON - steven on January 22, 2007
last thing the only reason you see spelling errors on my rants is because i cant look at the screen while typing (even though i type 70 words per minute) anyway thats all i gotta say about this hope you have fun and hope all anon's rot in hell have a nice fucking day.
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From ANON - steven on January 22, 2007
i meant getting pardon my typing
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From ANON - steven key on January 22, 2007
whos your fuckin daddy. Im not afraid to use my real name because i know dumb shits like lance are not going to do a god damn thing. I do like TBT's stories and as ive mentioned above this IS my real name shit talk me all you wan anon fagit's but when it comes down to it i would kill you fuckers before you even came 500 yards of my house oh and by the was xain is my brother and im REALLY loving it when people shit talk his writing you know what? He writes that in 5 minutes alright hes not even trying to create a good story if he wanted to make one he would take at least an hour to do so. Really come now to bad you sorry anon fucks cant post reviews now because the system admins got pissed off at you oh and to any admin reading this... I dont care if you ban my NAME from the site just dont touch xain he has nothing to do with this this is my own rant and your GOD DAMN LUCKY im not foamy or i could go on forever about how retarded this shit is getter. And tbone that E-Mail you sent xain helped him out a bit i thank you for that man un tell later im out

~~~~~Dragon King~~~~~
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From xain34 on January 22, 2007
well im not great at reviewing but i like your stories hell the quicksand ones are sometimes funny and sometimes tragic its not that im afraid what anybody thinks of what i read and honestly i dont care. Besides i just got back from an illness and im going back to working on my fanfiction as soon as possible this story i give a 45 the one in the pokemon section in anume with ash and misty looking for the mew i give a five out of five any other ones ill try and review there when i get more time untell then have fun pissing people off as much as i like to hear em whine XD

~~~~~xain~~~~~
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From elegyenigma on December 26, 2006
Ok, I'd stepped away because as soon as I read "Now I'm just posting as Anon to annoy you," I realized it was going to be a while until you started to act mature enough to just listen to other people...however, you stunned me by calming down entirely and apologizing. Your apology to me is accepted.

So, everyone cool now?
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From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2006
Hey...I'd like to apologize fully for everything, Tony. I was...quite pissed off and needed to vent it someplace... you just happened to be the target for my venting. Well, anyway, sorry again, for everything, and you do indeed have the right to write about whatever you want.

Just...make sure you give proper warning about it and post it where there is likely to not be people who are assholes all the time and not just when they're mad. So yea, keep writing your uh...your stuff and try to tone down on the sex in it. Seriously, if I can give you one little tip to improve, get off the topic of sex in basically every one of your stories. Really now, they don't ALL it.
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From ANON - TBoneTony on December 20, 2006
Well...I apreciate that you said Sorry to me Anon...but still some of your words have hurt.

But yours were not the only ones.

Many people from what they had done and said to me on my reviews did make me feel like no matter what I said, it only makes things worse.

I know what I do have is not something that is unique.

Everyone has a sexual fantasy in some shape or form. But it does not mean that it is a reflection of what they really do.

I just try to use my interests in my stories because I know it is healthy for me.

And no...I don't need help on it.

I just write the stories on the sites that cater to that sort of interest and even Adultfanfiction.net caters to anything that is sexual.

Perhaps I was wrong about the usual fanfiction.net, but it was one of the first sites I first leaarned about storywriting based on characters from anything from TV, Books and Videogames and even they have their shair of fettises like bondage and other things.

Many of wich I have no interst in but I do respect their interests of writing style.

So please...if you find yourself in a position where you need to criticise someone because of what they write about, walk a mile in their shoes.

Therefore, you will be a mile away, and you will have their shoes.

lol

TBone Tony
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From ANON - anon on December 17, 2006
I'm only using 'anon' now because it seems to annoy you so much...grow up.

What I'm trying to get across to you, Tony, is that I have no problem with different religions or cultures etc. You can all do your own thing there. What I do have a problem with, are sick sexual fetishes which really have no connection to race and/or religion, and people who try to make said nonexistent connections. Your arguments sound like a 3rd grader's in any case. But to the point now, I seriously just wish maybe you could explain why the hell seeing someone, namely a nude woman, getting eaten alive turns you on? It really just does not seem physically possible, unless you find yourself somehow imagining the victim is your penis and whatever eating it is a vagina. If that's the case, you really do need help.

Truly though, what I hate most about what you say is that you claim to have a unique writing 'style'. To put it politely, stop lieing to yourself. At least read your work outloud if you're going to keep writing anyway...perhaps then you might catch how half of what is in your stories could be outdone by a tub full of shit.
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From ANON - anon on December 16, 2006
Wow Enigma...you got racism from that...wow. Here's the thing then: I take almost sadistic pleasure in treating those who like sickening things such as...vore, feel like crap. I admit, its a real problem but I just can't help myself...but alas, you fuel the fires... But in any case I owe you, Enigma, and TBoneTony, an apology. So, sorry.

But you're still a sick bastard and a crappy writer TBoneTony.
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From ANON - TBoneTony on December 11, 2006
Hi Egnigma

Thanks for your honesty.

I don't think that vore or other fetishes will ever be socilly acceptable in modern society.
every time I look at the news, there is either a woman being raped or a child being raped and asulted and in honesty it makes me sick in my stomach.
Because people look at that and they assume that if people have a fettish or who are different then that means that they must be more likely to commit those crimes.

So in one way, I am an easy target because I have a different story writing style.
Yes and also not everyone will like my stories. I have known that since I realise I had developed my fetishes during my teenage years and when I tried to explain that to a few of my closest friends at school, they thought I was wierd. That was how much it hurt me at the time, but now it has made me stronger and able to realise that not everyone will like my stories.

Plus it not not always women that are eaten by things or sinking into quicksand in my stories. Link has his share of perils too. And also not all of my perils are sexual in nature, in chapter 6, there are a few perils that are not sexual because of the age of the characters at that time when Link looks back at his past life.

When it comes to poeple calling themselves anonymus, I just take their comments like a grain of salt.

No, I don't hate them. I don't hate anyone.

I just hope that people will get on with their lives and move on if they have a problem with something.

And also I think that it is womdeful that women and men have equel rights. So I do support women when it comes to equal rights, but I dont like it when there is a minority group that says "This is offencive" or "You should not right that" all because they look at things the wrong way.

eg. how many people say that christmas offends them just because they follow a different religion.

It just creates a bad example for all those good people out there who follow different religions but who also don't mind other people celebrating christmas even if they don't themelves.

If we are all to live together, we should respect each other no matter how different our believes are.
I may not be a christian but I still go to my bro-in-law's bible study to get to know about religious language, and there was that sheik in my country in October who refered a passage of the Keran to women as meat. (I took that comment and put it in the 6th chapter somewhere)
But what people don't realise that what he said was misinterprited by people and manipulated by the media.
What he was talking about was adultry and NOT women in general.
But even Christianity has a few comments along that same lines about adultry. Bot it can be easily taken the wrong way when the line says "She will try to lure you by the way she dresses..."
That comment was not a problem back 2000 years ago but it can easily be missinterprited in society today because of the way we all, not just women but also men like to get into swimming gear that show off the attractive parts of our bodies.

eg. Link shirtless in Zelda TP when he was practicing Sumo wresteling is an example on how men can look attractive to women.

Sorry about my long comment but I just hope that this controvercy over my style of stories can be over, it's been a year after since I had been on fanfiction.net and not all people hated my stories there too.

Once again Enigma, I thank you on your honesty, it's ok not to like my stories, I'm not forcing you to like them.

It's only the people who always try to tell me not to write stories the way I want them that makes my life a bit hard.

But please, this fighting should stop because I would hate it if anybody else got involved. It is not what the internet was for.

TBone Tony

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From elegyenigma on December 11, 2006
[quote]Or was that another "anon." There seems to be a bunch of you little shits who don't have the balls to actually use your pen-name when you write these reviews.[/quote]
Alright, Mr Lance. You see that, there? That effectively nullifies your accusations that I am a dumbass for thinking there is only one "anon." I am MORE than aware of what it is short for, which is exactly the reason I get as annoyed as I do when I see someone with that name; because what exactly are you trying to hide? This is the internet, of all things; practically nothing that happens negatively to people across it in these little bouts of net-drama ever affects somebody in real life, so if you have the gonads to tell someone they suck, why not have the gonads to say "oh, and by the way, this is my name, fucknugget, so bring it!" Or even a pen name, at least. I digress.

No, I do not find vore to be sickening. Why? Because I ignore it. I simply do not understand it, therefore, I have no interest. I do not intentionally seek out things that disturb me and rail against them. Vore is strange as hell, yes. But it's also something that interests and arouses others. Why should I attack them for their interests? It's not gonna change them nor is it going to change anybody else, it's just going to make me come off as a total asshole and a total dick. And what does that gain me? Enemies? I have enough of them as it is because of the fact that inevitably I find people like you, Lance, who want to try, however in vain it may be, to squash the fetishes or interests of others, and I get pissed because to try and crush someone's interests or fetishes or whatever is akin to oppression or suppression.

Yes, to the majority of people these days, to be interested in a woman getting eaten by quicksand or some monster is wierd and unacceptable in society. Yet, once, the thought of black people being free and equal as the rest of the US was considered socially unacceptable. Women having the ability to speak their minds and vote was considered socially unacceptable. I'm not saying vore will ever be socially unacceptable, but you never know, it might.

Narrow-mindedness is a sure route to self-destruction, my friend, and I'd advise on just accepting the beliefs of others as long as they're not harming anyone, rather than discriminating people on their interests; it's what I have done for the past 3 years and ever since I started I find myself at a much greater capacity for intellect than I had previously.

~LG Mills, aka The Enigma~
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From ANON - TBoneTony on December 10, 2006
You know...

I wonder if there is anybody else who has to put up with this sort of reviews always trying to force me to write something that I don't enjoy.

I have written some stories that don't involve sex, but they can't be found in adultfanfaiction.net because they are not adult stories.

Yes I do admit that I do have an interest in quicksand and other things like snakes and plants and spiders and tentacles. And I do put them intio my stories the way I want to.

But to try and force me to write stories that don't involve the perils that I enjoy writing is like telling Nintendo to design violent MA rated games because they are what sell these days.

Nintendo designs games that THEY want to design and I write stories that I want to write.

Plus if you look at other chapters in this story, even though they do have sex, it is not always about sex.

I can't please everyone.

So please...stop trying to tell me not to write anymore.

I do see your point of view but you are have the wrong idea about me.

My interests and fetishes I only take into my stories and imagination. I never do that sort of thing in real life.

It's like a teenager who loves to play Grand Theft Auto and his mother sees him playing it and she think that her son will grow up being that sort of violent person.
But if he knows that whet he does in Videogames like GTA is only fantasy and he is just a normal good person in real life then that is what many people are like.

We all have out adult imagination, but we need to express it in a way that does not hurt anybody in real life.

That is what I do in my stoires.

I know that bad things happen in my stories, so...? Any great story needs soemthing bad happening or else people will not feel interested in reading it.

If you don't like my stories? Don't read it.

If you want to say something bad about me? Read the whole story before you criticise me.

Or else I will have to remove reviews because of the foul language. There is no need for the F word no matter how bad you might think of the story.

Let's just keep that in fanfiction and keep it out of the reviews.

Also, I may not have a girlfriend but I do have many girl who are friends and some of them like my stories.

Plus what I do with my characters in my stories does not mean I am like that in real life.

Please don't take my stories too seriously.

Although I did say that last year and it seemed that not many listened to me.

So the only thing I have left to say is that I can't please everyone.

TBone Tony
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From ANON - Lance on December 10, 2006
Well ok then, Enigma. You can call me that now, if you hate 'anon' so much. But seriously, the reason I said what I said is because he does suck at writing. Now perhaps I should word it differently so people like yourself won't take it the wrong way. He writes at least half decent when it comes to general writing, like for instance descriptions of the enviroment. But everything his the characters in his stories say, well most of it anyway, is absolutely pathetic. And what I'm getting from his stories, is that he sees women as nothing more than cheap whores who'll have sex with any guy who makes them feel better about themselves.

It makes him seem for one, just really stupid, two, really immature, and three, like a complete loser who has never even spoken to a girl before. You get it now, Enigma? And please, I don't even have a pen name for this site. There are only a few things here I actually give a crap about here, and all the other stuff is just fics that have some of the most disturbing themes you'll ever see. But, I will say its a good thing there's a seperate site for fics like them.

But in any case, you seem to think I'm one of those sad mother fuckers who makes himself feel better by trashing people's work aimlessly. I laugh at thee. My writing, while still unpolished, is a helluva lot better than his, and as time goes on my writing gets better. Alot better His seems to improve slightly, as in he'll learn a new word or two to describe quicksand raping a woman. That was an outright uncensored flame, just so we're clear. If you really think you can gleam much about a person's writing ability from how they flame someone elses story, then you my friend are rather idiotic.

But to restate my opinion, this guy is a complete moron, and he's one of the sickest losers I've ever known to exist. How you could possibly find someone getting eaten alive arousing...I'll never know. And how could you in any way, shape, or form find a woman sinking in quicksand arousing, too? Simple examples of his disturbed self, but good ones to be sure. I mean, unless you're another sick fuck like him then you can't honestly say that's not sick.

And why would I take the time to flame it if I hate it? Well, to try, in vain I suppose, to get him to really go and rethink everything he's ever learned about writing. If you would look, then you would see almost every one of his stories is rated low, and almsot all his reviews say the story in question is crap. When he was on fanfiction.net, he just outright ignored any and every suggestion and helpful tip to improve and cleanup his future writing and present works.

I suppose I still feel there's a tiny glimmer of hope for him, but seeing as how he can't seem to even write a story that sounds like its at least going to have some form of a tangeble plot without sex(though I realized this is adultfanfiction, so it would be in there somewhere, but after the characters go through stuff and whatnot that made it not seem forced and altogether retarded), then I seriously doubt there is hope for him. Not to mention his sex scenes are just...pathetic.

So Enigma, don't jump to someone's defence when you hardly know why they're being attacked in the first place, lest you make an ass of yourself. Though I'm afraid you did, since you seem to think every Anon is the same guy. Its an abrevation for anonymous. Use your brain dumbass.
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From elegyenigma on December 06, 2006
By the way, the term for having a fetish for being eaten alive is called "Vore."
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From elegyenigma on December 06, 2006
All I have to say, Anon, is...

Chill the fuck out. If you hate this story so much, then why do you keep reading it? I don't like it. I stopped reading it. But at least I have the balls to be able to just shrug it off and not let it bother me...unlike you, who just blows up at the tip of a hat. Wait, aren't you the same guy who told me that if I didn't like a story that I should just, and I quote, "Fuck off?" Or was that another "anon." There seems to be a bunch of you little shits who don't have the balls to actually use your pen-name when you write these reviews. All I know is, you all oughta shut the fuck up; until I see proof that YOUR writing is any better than this, I'm going to assume that you can't write for shit, and therefore, shouldn't be telling other people their writing sucks, because for all we know, your writing is limited to these little outbursts of yours.
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