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Reviews for The Chaos Within

By : sonic232
  • From Darklordlight on May 10, 2010
    MMMMMMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Harley on October 31, 2006
    This really was a great story...

    But what happened to Shadow and Eggman? They didn't split when Amy gave up! Have they vanished forever? Or did you just forget them? Or is there a point?
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  • From ANON - anonymous on October 05, 2006
    I really like how you wrote the story, but you need more sex!! Other than that, fine.
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  • From ANON - The Dark chao on September 16, 2006
    I feel sad. Amy doesn't like eggman enough to give him a body back XD. Annny way It was a strangly apealing story. almost predicactable but still a nice change of pace.

    Thumbs up.
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  • From ANON - BZLF on September 13, 2006
    Just read all the chaptors. I figured Amy would absorb Sonic in the end. Kinda felt something odd when she absorbed Shadow, considering he'd dealt with the black arms already when she absorbs him. And it seems most likely that Metal Sonic is the one at the end, in the dark.
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  • From ANON - I stole your shoes on September 12, 2006
    Make the sequel now! I WANT A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Some Guy on August 23, 2006
    Wow, fantastic story thus far!!!! Can't wait for more! BTW, the whole Amy absorbing Shadow thing... I never saw that coming!
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  • From ANON - SomeGuy on August 16, 2006
    Man, this is one awesome story. Can't wait for the final chapter!
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  • From ANON - Cyborg Commando on August 09, 2006
    Excellent!

    I too have read "Sonic Sexual" and this does seem like an appropriate way to continue it. You've done a good job so far, but let's see if you can keep it that way.

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    "Will we see the return of Perfect Ch...err...the appearance of Perfect Amy?"

    Perfect Amy huh? *Imagines a giant, pink, liquid hedgenake* Sonic's definitely not going to marry her now. There's other characters that you forgot about. Omega, Chaotix and Metal Sonic. Will Amy absorb them? Or will you just leave them out? I can't find anything bad to say about this story so good work! We need more action/adventure fics out there so finish this up! I want to see the grand finale! Toodleoo!
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  • From ANON - Fret7345 on August 07, 2006
    I hope someone follows this up with another review shortly, I want to know where this goes next. I'm enjoying each chapter, and await your next story.
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  • From ANON - SSJWolverine on July 21, 2006
    Oh. My. God. NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - Son of a bitch on July 10, 2006
    dam! what will happen next? what kind of weirdo are u? well from what u said u won't update unless you get more reviews so heres my review. now update the dam story! and where did u get sonic sexual? i would like to know! tell me! or i will make chaos make YOU!
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  • From kittynakajima on July 09, 2006
    Given that I've had the fortune of reading Tojyo's hentai from which this is based, this is a pretty interesting continuation of it.

    Felt it was a bit rushed in some parts, but overall, pretty good. Especially the concept of who has 'control' - Amy, or Chaos, with Amy thinking she does, when Chaos is just really pointing her in the right direction.

    Anyhow, I'm looking forward to how this will all end up, given that there's really no one else left to assimilate with save Sonic. (or the Chaotix).
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  • From ANON - Princess Sara on June 25, 2006
    Hi there! I'm reviewing this story as a favor so I read this story as a favor as well. I didn't like this story, I'm sorry but it's true, I don't even like sonic the hedgehog, but this guy, funk man was what he called himself (he told me to mention him) was practically begging me to review this story. Well I'm done, hasta la vista baby!
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  • From ANON - disaster master on June 24, 2006
    Hey how's it going? good? ok then I read your story and I kinda liked it! I don't know what else to say besides I'm only doing this for funk man so you can update it he's the one who really wants to know the rest. I'll leave it at that. have a nice day!
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