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Reviews for My Dear Brother

By : Marianne
  • From hircineshound on May 20, 2008
    Okay, not meaning to be rude, but I have something to say.

    I like your style, and I think you are a very fair writer, but your grammar is atrocious. I am offering my services as a beta reader/fixer if you'd like them. Get back to me, I rather like this fic and I'd be more than pleased to fix the grammar errors.

    I signed in so you can email me when you see fit.

    I'm sorry, by the way, if I sound presumptuous or arrogant, but I would really like to see this in a more... Litterate fashion.
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  • From Yaoicreator on March 31, 2007
    That was really nicely done! It was so sweet - and yet so hot!! Good job!
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  • From ANON - Rebecca Mayo on July 20, 2006
    That was cool. :) good job. keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Raziel on June 25, 2006
    YAY! I love Legacy of kain yaoi! I love this story! lol
    "Its me... Rahab" Said Zephon. lol
    hehehe
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