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Reviews for Shattered Scepters

By : Dvorchak
  • From InvidiaRed on July 09, 2010
    I like how you portray the Malkavian lolli

    insane but devious
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  • From trigana on July 19, 2008
    It's so tragic when people write the best stories ...so that even though you don't really read the fandom much you check back every couple days just to see if there's an update.. and they just stop, exactly when things are getting most exciting.

    It's such a fine story, I do hope you decide to take it up again.
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  • From CammyCape on June 09, 2008
    Aside from a few odd tense-shifts (narrative suddenly going from past to present tense, then back again), and a few grammar and spelling issues, I really like this story so far. While Stephan is a little too stony for my tastes for me to find really engaging personally, I like all the other characters you've come up with (it's nice to see that Lolli, while a Malkavian and obviously a little unhinged, doesn't have the stereotypical bat-shit madness a lot of writers tend to fall back on), and the way you're wrapping the layers of intrigue around one another. I hope you continue with this, because I'd like to see where you're going with it. Cheers!
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  • From trigana on May 25, 2008
    This is so well written! Well developed characters, an interesting storyline - I'm enjoying every minute of it. I hope you continue with it, as I'm on the edge of my seat.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2007
    "Do I have to get naked?"

    Lol nice. You've expressed what a daughter of Malka should act like.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2007
    I had to laugh at the end...
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  • From ANON - JackAttack on December 13, 2007
    Wonderful Chapeter!

    The plot thickens...and through e-mail no less. Seems to parralel the real world in that respect, people say something different to everyone else.
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  • From ANON - JackAttack on November 10, 2007
    Impressive. Most impressive.

    A suggestion: Slow your writing down just a small ammount, I see word misplacements in this piece (Things spell check won't pick up ex. piece/peace) often enough, and though it doesn't kill the story, it does snap me back to reality in the reading of it.
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  • From ANON - Jay on September 02, 2007
    Cant wait for an up-date
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  • From ANON - Jason on December 15, 2006
    This is one the best written fanfiction I have read. Also there are so few for the Vampire the Masquerade game which has a great world to work with. Can't wait to see were you go with this story.
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  • From ANON - Kelly on August 10, 2006
    Very nicely done! Continue writing and I'll continue reading!
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  • From ANON - mistress ebony on August 07, 2006
    i used to play Cam and really enjoy this story. i like how you have Lollipop crazy but not silly, drooling crazy. hope to read more !!!!
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  • From ANON - Spike Junkie on July 15, 2006
    Hi,

    I just read the three parts you have posted, I have to say I like it so far, and am interested in reading more if there will be more.

    sissy
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