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Reviews for Primal

By : Camaro
  • From ANON - Jaye on January 24, 2013
    You HAVE to continue this and Prime Evil! PLLEEASSE!
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  • From BastsApprentice on May 23, 2012
    Wow I was really impressed, it's so different than so many other things I've read, I like it keep it up
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 08, 2011
    wow! from darkly humourous (i like how lady has vergil by the balls despite his shitty treatment of her!) to just dark - vergil - you murdering bastard! keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 05, 2011
    oh f**k

    i started reading this fic when you had uploaded the first three chapters. i followed it along...


    yesterday, since a looong time, i looked into the dmc-rubric and thought, mh, 'primal'? doesn't that sound familiar? - and oh yes, it does.
    i love it.
    pleeeeease, keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 03, 2011
    added:

    in light of all the accusations of 'vergil bashing' i actually think you did a fine job in presenting him as three dimensional and complex, his rivalry with dante on all levels (as brothers, warriors, relations with women), his romantic love for lady and repulsion at her father's abhorrent treatment of her which nobly motivates him to save her, yet his love for her too becomes violent and obsessive, but is that his demonic side??? he keeps you guessing (like salim in slumdog!! sorry rapid example and it was the first one!)

    keep writing, i wanna see him surprise us more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 03, 2011
    awesome!!

    fantastic writing style, great dialogue and incredibly mature and descriptive i loved how you totally nailed the characters personalities and added to them oh so convincingly - i think i'm starting to fancy dante now! and lady really did deserve more attention from capcom's writers - adorable

    i dug how the pace changed from dark and sexy (lady, dante and vergil's relationship) to all of a sudden incredibly mature and full of humanity and pathos in the way you handled lady's history with her father and vergil - vergil you bastard! but seriously all that was done so sensitively without being expliotative at all - such good writing - do not listen to your detractors for they are merely hacks!

    and then everything became so romantic with the tale of sparda and eva - lush!!! i'm hooked!

    MORE!
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  • From NiuNiu on July 01, 2008
    Thank you for coming up with such a wonderful story! I couldn´t stop reading it last night and now I´m all tired but happy xD The way you write is like watching a rare painting forming up, the language both screaming agony and such touching beauty despite the themes of this fic. I hope we will get happy ending though, but what ever you decide to come up with it surely will be something totally awesome! Like this says a woman who has read fanfictions for last 6 years and see all kind of fics! ^____________^

    Oh, btw, the scene where Lady violated Dante after him calling Lady a whore - it would have been a "nice" touch if Lady spat on Dante before leaving, since I would have AT LEAST spat on the person who calls me a whore after attacking on me himself xD

    -NiuNiu-
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  • From MacAnimeGirl on February 25, 2008
    Damn good, in my personal opinion.

    Seriously, people need to lighten up a little. I'm not a chick who's into the whole Dante x Vergil & vice-versa pairing but I do like the story. I think this is quite interesting and hope that you will continue writing more Solstice!! Let me know when you update. I will definitely read it!!!
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  • From Samric on January 15, 2008
    Okay, here's probably why so many people are freaking out and declaring your story a failure: everybody loves Vergil. He's an evil little bitch that everyone wants to strangle, but they still love him. They can't freaking help it! Both Dante and Vergil have polar opposite versions of charisma, but they've still got it. Calling Vergil the embodiment of all evil—not good.

    I, for one, am holding back my judgment until later on in the story—I know better than to pass judgment early on—but even I am experiencing some teeth gnashing at the idea of Vergil being so evil as to be unredeemable. But hey, maybe that's not even the direction you're going in, so I'm going to just shut up and enjoy the ride.

    And why is everyone having their little rant-fests in the reviews section? There's this niffty little feature labeled "Discuss Story." Why not use that?
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  • From BrucesGirl on August 09, 2007
    Ah, yes, the flamers. Another reason why I choose not to post on AFF anymore.

    But that doesn't mean that I won't review.

    Let me congratulate you on a story well done. What I've read is not only original, but it's well put together and developed. While Dante is a bit OOC (not being so much a brooder as he is a smartass and a lazyass) I'm really impressed with the depth you give him in regards to his obsession over Dante. It's that way in the games, the books, the manga... everything. Not so much in the anime yet, but then again, there's only what... eight episodes out at this point?

    Your syntax, formatting, and grammar is superb. In fact, it's so superb that my English professor would be jealous. It's nice to read a story that has a great setup and formatting, and it's easy on the eyes to read. Ignore the flamers on here that declare your story to "suc" and just keep right on creating your amazing chapters.

    Flamers on this site all have one thing in common. They have no brains. Period. Trust me, I know. XD

    I'm glad to see a good work like this on the site. Bravo!
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  • From kurijiko on July 28, 2007
    oh man. MORE MORE MORE. I WANT MORE!

    beautiful story so far.
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  • From ElvenAngel on July 05, 2007
    Even though the sheer quantity of twincest fics (not to mention 'bad quality twincest fics') has made me sick of the genre...

    ...this is actually quite well writen as a piece of fiction! I have to compliment you on this, friend, you definately have worked a lot on this story. The gramar, syntax and structure is taken good care of, and that's usually one of my greatest gripes about fan-fiction. Really now, so many wannabe writers don't give squat about the sanity of others. *sigh* But that's hardly a problem with this story, so its all good.

    The characters are pretty well-developed, and maintain their original personalities, for the most. At least, they work well within the context of the story. There's a few rather OOC parts that made me wince, but they're minor, so I guess I can let that pass without guilt.

    An okay story overall, I suppose, even though its yet another twincest fic. The straight scenes, and the good writing sorta make it easier to tolerate, though. I've been reading all the comments on it though, and I gotta shake my head at the immaturity of some noobs... Its kinda sad. I see the story's been around for a while, but still... so many arguments-- and so many fans. Huh. And my poor story's only been reviewed by my close friends, noone else... what's a non-yaoi writer gotta do to get some feedback around here...? o_o

    Don't misjudge me, please, I'm merely wondering...
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  • From kurijiko on May 19, 2007
    continuuuuuueeeee.

    I'm enjoying this too much for it to be another incomplete fic.
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  • From maderine on February 10, 2007
    Okay, first thing I'm going to say is I'm deeply disappointed to see the way that readers on this site have been treating you and your story. I would think that, considering this is an R/NC-17 archive, we'd all be ADULTS here, but apparently not.

    The second thing I want to say is that I am a Vergil fan, and I don't believe that this story is bashing him in any way. It's an AU, and a very interesting and original one at that. I hope to see more chapters go up, and I will continue reading them as long as they do. I think that your writing style is very reminiscient of the mood and atmosphere of the game itself - dark, gritty, gothic, and beautiful. Keep up the good work, and ignore the infantile comments.
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  • From ANON - Meow-chan on January 12, 2007
    All I can say is wow.O_O!!!!

    Please write more the whole story is amzaing and the interacts between them awsome ^-^


    And I hope you do update soon because for some reason all the storys I love never get updated...-_-;;
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