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Reviews for Light Within

By : Niffty24
  • From blissfulldarkness on February 01, 2011
    this story is really good! although my inner zelloyd fangirl is berating me for actually reading kratosxzelos.. xD but i really love this plot, with yggdrasill being freaking super evil and just wow. i feel so bad for zelos
    wishing there was more to this ^^ this is an awesome story!
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  • From LinkLover on August 28, 2008
    Nicely written and very sweet. I especially liked the line 'How many people could one man protect without breaking?' Not sure if I agree entirely with the dynamics with the Kratos X Yggy scene, but the rest of it I like and agree with. Nicely done
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  • From Henako on January 03, 2008
    Absolutely wonderful
    Please continue.
    I love how you've efortlessly gathered in some facutal parts of the game as parts of the story.
    Except for a small amount of vaugeness, and spelling errors, this story scrapes the surface of perfect
    Can't wait until the next chapter,
    ~Harlequin, The Masked Deciever
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  • From ANON - Robyn on November 15, 2006
    This has pretty much everything I could want in a story. O_O PRETTY PLEASE CONTINUE SOON! :D
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  • From ANON - Loli on November 05, 2006
    Oh you have to continue this! Its so sad! Poor Kratos! ;_;
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  • From ANON - Sylvia Viridian on October 26, 2006
    OMG!!111!one! THis fic is, like, so *ttly* awesome!! Plz continue soon!!!




    ...Gomen, I couldn't help myself. ^_^; Seriously, though, post more soon so that I can narcissistically read over my own work?
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