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Reviews for Suikoden V - Knightly Service

By : Streti
  • From ANON - random review dude on September 09, 2007
    Sialeeds is my second favorite Suikoden V girl. Kisara is by far my favorite though. Either way, I love these gangbang stories. And your cum finales are simply amazing. I wish you would get a little more descriptive as far as her physical appearance, though. Maybe describe the movements of her body as she's getting slammed. Stuff like that.
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  • From Streti on October 16, 2006
    Ah, thanks for the reviews and suggestions. But the issue isn't entirely about reviews - there is a part of me that doesn't feel like writing stories anymore, even when there is another part that still does.

    As for all the yaoi on AFF - that's what I mean by lemons dying. I don't consider yaoi lemons, at least for myself, and they seem to be swamping the real lemons that I guess have passed their prime. As for omae and the flow of the story: it is a symptom of the change in my writing attitude, actually something that I have been aiming at. The old style Streti might be gone already.
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  • From ANON - omaesan on October 07, 2006
    I read your story, as always, I'm patiently waiting for your new ones. I felt that there was no need to review it, for I would repeat the ordinary "good work". But since you got all emo saying you got no reviews, I figured a response was in order. Message catched ;-)

    First, the story. It's good, but you are right: there's something wrong with it. I'd say the narrative pulse isn't as strong as your previous ones. People change postures and actions without notice and with very little detail, a thing is not bad itself but that works bad with detailed PWP such as yours.

    Second, the game fanfics dying. I don't think so. Did you ever go to that link in this website that says "Latest"? I see new stuff coming everyday. OK that almost everything is yaoi v_vU and the few straight ones aren't very good, but that is why your presence is so necessary. It's true that other sites like greyarchive, where you posted a lot of your works, are dying. But that is solely the work of its webmaster, with 3 different layouts, meaning 3 different passwords, a first page where finding new stories is a nightmare, a forum almost abandoned, and the core of the web with the same outdated MS-DOS text only look and going with plain html from the times of Netscape 1.0. The sites die, game fanfics never does.

    Third, you bored of your stories. Maybe you have to try a few new things. Try to get a game character that you like and put her (preferably) in situations completely different of the game she came. Forget trying to fit the sex scenes into the main plot of the game. Do something radical. A recomendation of mine is "The change in Tifa" in this very site, Final Fantasy section. The characters are the same, but the plot is totally different. Try something like that.

    And last, the lack of reviews. I think it has to be the excessive amount of new material posted everyday. Most people looking for stories go to the "latest" section to see what new stories got posted. But to be informed of aaaall the postings would require a daily check of the site, a thing most people don't do. The yaoi girls know this, that's why they cut their stories in fine portions and we see their multi-epic assrape fanfics almost everyday in the "latest" section. While your works, usually one long story every one or two months doesn't get even noticed. I'm not saying that you have to make multipart stories now, I like them as they are, just tell you the reason, I think, of the lack of attention.

    Please forgive my bad english, and keep up the good work. I will be rooting for you. ^0^
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  • From bonemaster on October 04, 2006
    I love it!
    I'm honoured to have my name mentioned,
    you have some payback to look forward to..
    ..eventually! =D
    Thanks again mate and don't stop!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 02, 2006
    Hot hot hot!!
    Saileeds is very well portrayed and I like how she's partially dressed during the act.
    I love the triple penetration but I wished that it could've lasted a little longer.
    The yummy cumshots totally make up for it though! Good job!

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  • From ANON - McDohl on October 02, 2006
    A very good story just like all of your stories. And don't let the lack of reviews make you think otherwise. It just seems to me that most people don't want to take the time to leave a few words which is a disservice to everyone and especially to the author. I can understand why you may feel like there's no sense in writing any more. But I for one would really miss your stuff and I'm sure others will too. Also you are too hard on yourself your stories are always well written and very descriptive and are among the very best out there. Also unlike some Authors out you can tell that you have really put in the time to make a story as good as it can be. That may be one of the reasons your burn out. You don't have to try and make an epic everytime maybe if you try to write a small story every once in awhile maybe you'll not be as burn out and maybe get your spark back not to say you have lost your skill cause your still one of the very best out there. Anyway I hope you can get your desire back and not quit writing but I'll understand if you stop writing.
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  • From ANON - Premierdial on October 01, 2006
    This was a nice little story that's just fun without being too draggy or long. I'm not too far into Suikoden 5 (10 hours in), but knowing the characters here helped me enjoy the story quite a lot - which, they were amusingly believable within character, even in a lemon such.
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  • From Streti on October 01, 2006
    Only two reviews after all this time? I guess Sialeeds isn't what people wanted after all.

    As for Unnamed, what's with this code of writing ethics? You must be confusing me with somebody else. At some point, I have even encouraged requests. Never doing them? I'm always open for requests - I just never promise to act on them. It all has to do whether I find the request agreeable.

    The thing with Skies of Arcadia is, I played that game years ago. I've got no special incentive to write anything more for it, especially since I would have to get the Gamecube version to play the game again. If I got that game from somewhere, this might very well change, but as the situation is currently, I'm not giving any promises.

    That is partly because I feel like my lemon writing days are coming to an end. My stories have been treading the same ground for a long time now, and I'm getting tired of them. This story, too - it appears that there is something wrong with it, yet nobody is writing a review to say what it is. Video game lemons are dying, and my efforts are not helping them any. My stories are steeped in irrelevance and formulaic repetition.
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  • From ANON - Unnamed on September 12, 2006
    It was good. I mean, not the best thing since sliced bread, or even the best you've ever written, but very enjoyable, and totally void of gramatical errors. It could have been a little longer too, but for its present length, it is, again, very good.

    I have something to say. I realize that you have a very strict code of writing ethnics. I realize that you like constructive criticism. And, most of all, I realize that you have likely realized where this is going and are not even reading farther. But, regardless, I feel that I must speak my mind.

    I would like to request a fic. I would to see a true Skies of Arcadia orgy lemon. I have very few specific requests, really. I would just like to see the three main characters together, along with some of the crew, specifically Belle, and maybe Enrique and Moegi, along with anyone else you would like. I also, and I can hear your eyes rolling in disgust from my arrogance, would rather not have the pairings be too random or disturbing.

    I know you never do requests. I know you hate whiners and patronizers. So, I only ask that you reply yea or neigh on this review board.

    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Jeanes on September 12, 2006
    I enjoyed this story quite a bit. It was very sexy and I loved the vivid sex description. I especially liked little details and the image of Sialeeds on the bed with just a sash, an underskirt, and a stocking...


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