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Reviews for Intelligent Flower

By : flyingwind66
  • From ANON - xiaoren359 on June 04, 2016
    I must say that I have been wandering around pretty long in the internet just to find an actual fanfiction about Lu Xun and his wife that being written seriously and fully wrap with Chinese culture, and then I found this fic. Must say that I really love it, the characters' thinking and their development, the story's atmosphere is all so sensible. Even thought that I know you may never continued to write it or even reading this comment, since, well, it's actually been 10 years (sound amazing to me haha), but I still want to thank you for have created such a wonderful fanfiction, It's a pleasure to ever be able to read this one, really.
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  • From NinjaGaijin on September 21, 2007
    Hiya, it's me again :) The next day comes exactly a year after. That's okay, us writers get that all the time.

    It's great to see how Ming Hua and Lu Xun interact. Such sweet newlyweds... I can see that 'Intelligent Flower' could match her studious husband. Maybe she'll take interest in military strategy too! Anyway, your chosen timeframe (211) is a rather quiet period for Wu. Still a long time until Lu Xun gets into action.

    Btw, the aunt in this chapter would be Aunt Xiao Qiao, right? Because Aunt Shang Xiang doesn't have sons of her own. And I assume Cousin Ying would be Zhou Ying, Zhou Yu and Xiao Qiao's daughter.

    Loved the references. Nothing I enjoyed more than results of good research. Looking forward to the next parts!
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  • From ANON - ladykwee on September 29, 2006
    It's a beautiful fiction! I hope you like my fic the contract
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  • From NinjaGaijin on September 17, 2006
    Well Done! I appreciate the fact that you did your homework [research, calculations, cultural considerations, etc] before writing it, and the result is a story that has the feel of the times. Your story makes a good example of how people should write Romance of the Three Kingdoms/Dynasty Warriors fanfics.

    Maybe you could expand more on the story. Write something about how Sun Ming Hua, your character the wife of Lu Xun, plays a role in his husband's life as the last great Wu strategist. Maybe show her interaction with her mother (Da Qiao, probably in a flashback), her auntie Shang Xiang (or maybe even her uncle Liu Bei?), etc. Anything. I really hope you'll write more.

    Again, great story!

    ps: You mentioned someone with the name 'Lu Kang'... IIRC, Lu Xun's son is named Lu Kang, and he's one of the last great generals in the Three Kingdoms era.
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