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Reviews for Elliot: Chick Magnet

By : Liriana
  • From ANON - Jaquard on December 21, 2006
    Not bad. You could certainly get a proof-reader (lots of missing words, etc.) but you wrote sussinctly. You could have had Christie stretch it out, though. Most women love to play men's minds and she could have screwed around more with the "fragile" Elliot.
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  • From ANON - Havenoname on November 20, 2006
    At first I thought you were some one else, but after looking though FFNet for your profile I think you're the same author who wrote this fic.

    Does my screen name jog a memory?
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  • From ANON - James Porter. on November 17, 2006
    That was kinda mild. I would've expected them to get naked. I would've liked a mental image of Christie's cans.
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