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Reviews for Hidden Joys

By : thegame1985
  • From roxanne14 on October 14, 2010
    Will you be contining this?
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  • From Unolai on June 12, 2009
    Kudo's to you for having proper sense of grammar and using it perfectly. Too bad it's the only positive thing I can say about this story. It's so hard to read, I didn't even get through chapter one! All of the conversation is bunched together. And your lemon scene does exactly nothing to me. It's like something you read in a biology book. Way too plastic.

    I hope I didn't offend you, but I had to say this.
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  • From CrazyIvan on March 11, 2007
    Two eight nine alpha chalie lemmur.
    Delta nine delta nine, bravo echo november three three seven nine.
    Alpha kilo four seven.
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  • From ANON - funkman on December 10, 2006
    After reading the review you left for "Wrong Turn At Wormhole 117," I decided to come by this story and give it a review. You said that people used your story for a quick 'wank' and left. Well... ::looks up at Pervert:: seems like it. That could be because, so far, all I've seen is sex a quick fight and more sex. Even chapter five seems like that's all it's gonna be, only with a little conflict.

    The thing that widened my eyes though, was when you mentioned Metal Sonic. Yes, I am a huge Metal Sonic fan, and I would like to see him involved in this fic. At the end of chapter five you mentioned a puddle on the ground. It left me wondering whether it's Metal Sonic, or a puddle of cum from the 'torture'. Because if you recall in Sonic Heroes, Metal Sonic emerged several times from a grey puddle of some sort.

    I guess I'm done talking now. I'll be waiting for your next update. Later!
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(nomoremrniceguy) on December 10, 2006
    Well this plainly shows how pure smut is basicly what everyone wants here. 700+ hits versus the 250 on mine here when they started at the same time. And look at my pokemon fics, i mean, the 10chapter on i put up, my first ever actual plot fiction berely has 1000 hits, and my overheat one, that i wrote in half an hour, has nearley 13000. this is just disheartining, but funny at the same time.
    Anyways, as for your fic here, it's decent, got nice stuff, but at the same time extremely hard to read. Your forat is really bad it's not blocky, but you put all the speech together, and it is hard to detewrmine wtf is going on sometimes. Anyways, I'll expect more of this stuff, or I might have to pay you a small visit.
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  • From ANON - Pervert on November 17, 2006
    *cums all over keyboard* sexy story
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