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Reviews for Sonic Underground-Super Speed and the theft

By : Kouji
  • From ANON - Gremlin on December 11, 2006
    Woa! woa! Listen there, umm, Son of a bitch. The author can write whatever the hell she feels like writing. Read another story if you don't like this one. There's plenty out there. Shoo now.
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  • From ANON - Son of a bitch on December 09, 2006
    ew, your gay! when will people stop writing yaoi? stop it!
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  • From DanskJaeger on November 29, 2006
    A so-so attempt. The main issue with this is both Sonic & Manic seem to lack the motivation for them to go screwing each other. It would've been fair enough if they were just having a play around, but there was no indication of that. I did like the comment about them being apart for 16 years though.

    For future chapters, try to establish a basic sense of emotion between the two before you dive right into the action, which was rather well done. ^^
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