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Reviews for ARAAT4: Origins

By : Breech_Loader
  • From CrazyIvan on January 15, 2007
    "ahalrighty then, I'd like to know what you mean that we're all getting it so wrong, what the hell are you talking about woman!" (shakes harely by the neck infrustration, is then hit over the head with multible frying pans, a group of Creavons drag me off)

    Vladranov: (sighs) "What he means to say, is that he is confused, and would appreciate an explaination. As for me, I say you still have an excelent format, as well as great spelling, and I hope we can continue to see much more too come."

    (struggling with the Creavons) "YOU'VE NOT SEEN THE LAST OF ME!"
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(HellsYeah!) on January 13, 2007
    Damnit, sorry bout my offlineness, but I'm finaly back. And Harely, DM, both excelent guesses, but not correct. I'll give you a bit more time and another hint. It can be found at the check out lane of a certain store for kids.
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  • From ANON - BZLF on January 13, 2007
    Will Midnight be transformed via Chaos Tempest? That thought struck me as I was reading through Mirages testing in the Core. Will Black Doom release the Artificial Chaos-to motivate Gerald to work faster, or perhaps as punishment for not making Shadow the way Doom wants? And, will anything Gerald/Shadow/Mirage and Ashura/Midnight do here and now effect what GUN does to Shadow in the near-present(ARAAT2 era)?? What of Espio?, Mirage seems not to care about him with Midnight on the scenes here. Does GUN wipe Mirages memery of Midnight as punishment for them staying together? And what of the Gizoid, again? Will it be key to the Artificial Chaos breaking free or perhaps Black Dooms overall plan? So many questions. I hope to have gotten atleast one right, or failing that, atleast to have gotten close.
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  • From ANON - japperon on January 10, 2007
    i love this novel i say novel cause it is now 66 chaps long. i love sonic and this is the best story i have read

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  • From ANON - Rand^^ on January 10, 2007
    Well I'm always down for some smut, but you could have put in a little story.
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  • From ANON - MufaZu on January 07, 2007
    Ah. That made my day. Thank you, for another amazing chapter. Reading your works makes me want to pick up a pencil and put it to paper. So... is Midnight going to turn into Knux via chaos explosion, like what happened to Sonic? Or is Quilla gonna take over and slaughter a few hired G.U.N.s? Tell me if I'm getting warmer?
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  • From ANON - BZLF on January 06, 2007
    Well done. [i]Very[/i] well done. I have the feeling, however, that those two are going to get in troble due to the clothing slip.
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  • From ANON - Disaster Master on January 05, 2007
    Heard about the Blowjobman ordeal, and may I just say... what an ass. Hell, I'm pretty disastrous myself and I like to pick on people, (hence my name) but I wouldn't do what he did. Everyone's reviews are gone now.

    To the topic at hand, wonderful. I think that Mirage's actions will cause a huge change in history. Since she is warning everyone about a huge disaster, that might lead to a change in history. For example, when I read the part where she was warning Sonic to hide and not fight, I think that might lead to Sonic being captured or perhaps even dieing as opposed to him fighting and maintaining the proper history time line.

    Now I need to reply to a few people above. First of all, to Pathetic...

    I just read NoWhere_Man's story, and... well... it's good, oh, it's very good. I kind of agree with you. I'm having a hard time deciding which one is better, ARAAT or MNWY. Harley, you need to read it, I recommend it to you.

    To CrazyIvan; my answer is: a copy of Red Alert 2. Am I right?
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  • From ANON - Pathetic... on January 05, 2007
    This time I'll give you credit - you did make a great story, even if it was a ShadAmy fic. But it still pales in comparison to "My Night With You" by NoWhere_Man.

    Even though this story will never surpass MNWY, I trust you to try and make it better. Brighten my opinion on this story.
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  • From funkman on January 04, 2007
    Thats sucks. Everyone's reviews are gone, was it really that bad of spam?

    Good chapter as always, things are getting more intense as the 'big disaster' comes closer to occur. I'm out of time, sorry. Busy as always.
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  • From CrazyIvan on January 04, 2007
    Since you don't have a new chapter up I can't give you any new comments, so i'll leave you with this riddle.
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    What carries entire navies and armies like toys, but is no bigger than a small child?
    I'll give you but one hint, it isn't a fruitcake.
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  • From Weasel on January 02, 2007
    I'm happy you got rid of the crap.

    Oh yeah, good story, too.
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  • From ANON - Piglord on January 01, 2007
    hmm...Well since you had to repost the story due to assholes I guess its only justified I drop a review to get you guys back on track...
    Anyway...Yes, I guess this is the 'calm before the storm' what with the talk of GUN taking over the ARK. I'm guessing we are going to see some character deaths here?
    Anyway look forward to reading more, happy new years.


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  • From ANON - Terminus Est on January 01, 2007
    Very interesting story, although it gets confusing at times. I have a feeling that this Quilla personality will be the death of Midnight. Sonic seems to be his usual arrogant jackass self that he is in your stories.
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  • From ANON - BZLF on January 01, 2007
    Figures the fucking retard would try something like that. I'm sorry you lost your reviews and such. Again, the chapter was good. Characters are still developing(sP?) nicely. I await your future update and I do hope you two will continue to do so inspite of the ignorants of this site.
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