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Reviews for Bloody Domination 2: Straitjacket

By : Breech_Loader
  • From Draconis on February 08, 2007
    I know I haven't reviewed in a while but don't think I forgot about this story. It's very interesting, to say the least. I rather like what you have so far and I greatly enjoy the way you write Eggman. This story, while starting slow, has picked up greatly and I'm once again interested.

    That's truely all I can say for now.
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(FuckingBusy) on February 02, 2007
    Well, I'm just stopping by to drop a review via author protocal 194. Good chapter, I speed read, but got the jist of it. Nice format no errors, blah blah blah.
    Well, gotta run, those exams arn't going to get themselves done!
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  • From DisasterMaster on January 31, 2007
    Good, not anything new, but still nicely well done. Everyone still seems to be in character, and nothing has gone wrong in my eyes. And this time I found no spelling errors, good job! I'm keeping a close eye on this fic.
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  • From ANON - steven on January 31, 2007
    well no shit he's going to do something stupid froggy its fuckin sonic the hedgehog where talking about here.
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  • From eminem268 on January 31, 2007
    Shadow being force fed drugs by the G U N staff. That's an all time low, even for them. I hope Sonic gets Shadow the hell outta there. This fic is on my personal favorites list.
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  • From ANON - ben on January 27, 2007
    hey make a new one i really insterted to know how and when shadow gets out and what amy will do when shadow comes back to her and the baby. how will amy deal with the baby and what about shadow tell me i want to know about this story and will it be a shadamy story
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  • From ANON - Disaster Master on January 24, 2007
    I noticed a few spelling/punctuation errors this chapter, and that's not a common thing with you. Did you rush this chapter?

    Chapter 3= 4.5 out of 5. This is still my second to favorite story here.

    I'm done, I'm going to go play Metroid Prime Hunters. It's a badass game, for a DS game at least.
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  • From Draconis on January 24, 2007
    (Or Draconis)

    Forgive me for not reviewing the last chapter but you'll be happy to know I joined just so I could review your story.

    So I'll break the review into three seperate parts this time:

    The Author's Notes on Chapter 2:
    Froggy: I know we said Sonadow in the summary, but for people who hate slash, they'll be glad to know that there's surprisingly little Sonadow (or indeed any slash) and quite a lot of plot about how they get there. After all, Shadow did go on a murderous rampage in the last story.

    I understand there being a lot of plot (as there needs to be) but if your warnings/summary pretty much imply that there is going to be Slash then how can there not be any SLASH? (Or were you saying there was going to be very little of that too?)

    Chapter 2
    I'll admit, another reason I haulted in reviewing was because I wanted to see what would happen in Chapter three after reading this chapter. You built up so much suspense in the first chapter and then seemed to all but defuse it in chapter two: we found out that Amy was keeping the baby (which killed Shadow/Shadow's shadow) having to go after it, Sonic was the one that went to see him (even though you mislead us into thinking it was going to be a human)so that technically answered why he 'wasn't' going (he actually was), Shadow's still stuck with G.U.N. and very little in the ways of his smart assed shadow. I was a little disappointed...that is until I read the third chapter...

    Chapter 3
    I actually felt sorry for Tails in this chapter, espically when Sonic asked him to go visit Shadow, and Amy's anger was to be expected. At least she's planning to have the baby...though Sonic made an excellent point: giving the baby away just to keep from Shadow isn't the brightest of ideas. Though I noticed Knuckles wasn't in this chapter either, to see how he was 'coping' with things. It will definately be interesting to see how he and Sonic react to each other.

    I look forward to the next chapter, as I'm interested to see how (and when) Shadow will break out and what that will mean...
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  • From CrazyIvan on January 20, 2007
    Hurray! I finnaly figured out the thing with the reviews mc doo hicky!! Everyone can now leave their thoughts on my stories! BTW, great job on chapter again.

    Ivan out.....
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  • From Weasel on January 20, 2007
    Update more, damn it!
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  • From ANON - Disaster Master on January 19, 2007
    I find myself unsure of what I want. At times, I root for Shadow to go back to killing people, but at the same time... I also root for him to take the path of redemption. And I still don't understand how Sonadow is possible. I can see that Sonic is forgiving Shadow, but it also looks like Sonic is holding back his anger. Like when Shadow brought up the subject of Amy and his baby, Sonic seemed to hesitate. Chapter 2= 4.5 out of 5. This story is my favorite story on this site. (Aside from Secret Affair of course, which I can't review because I don't have an account here.)

    Speaking of which, CrazyIvan: I'll have to comment your fic from here since I can't review due to the latter. All I can say is; WHAT THE FUCK!!!! Rosie O'Donnel? Darth Vader? You're crazy. But I was also laughing my ass off while reading it. Your fic is also enjoyable. I give your fic: 4 out of 5. Keep it up you crazy-ass mother fucker!

    I might make an account here just to review... or maybe not. Only time will tell. Ya'll have a nice mother fucking day!
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  • From on January 19, 2007
    I wonder if this fanfic will include Vector, charmey, and espio?
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  • From ANON - Sonicmuscfan on January 19, 2007
    MY GOD!! This is the best work of FANFIC I AHVE EVER SEEN!! You, sir, are a fanfic GOD!! lol, jk. You're pretty good. Can't wait for the next one.
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  • From CrazyIvan on January 17, 2007
    Damn trolls, making me have to put that much more effort to leave a review. Oh well, I could use the excersise. Nice second chapter, spelling and grammar are fine, format well done, the situation awareness usage is a fine touch. I like cheese. You still didn't answer my question, are we gonna see zombies? Perhaps GUN had revived some of its soldiers and officers (with or without Rouge) The way I heard, as long as the brain is intact, you can bring the body back to like via electro shocking stuff. Something like a heart is simple enough to replace. Personaly I'd like to see a zombie invasion, but it's completely to you.
    And since my pal Orima isn't a member, I'm gonna gove you his thoughts on it too.

    Orima: You scare the shit out of me, you know that? I won't be able to sleep tonight, they're everywhere man, voices, The Man, THEY'RE OUT THERE I TELL YOU!

    That's lovely Orima, now it's time for me to say good bye, hopefuly I made no one cry.
    Semper phi, carry on...

    PS: WHY IS NO ONE REVIEWING MY UPDATED STORY!! >_
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(IMBACK!) on January 12, 2007
    Alright, well a good start no doubt.
    First off, I need to know, are you going to make it an actualy freaky shit-your-pants kinda fic, or an Army of Darkness cheapo laughable horror fic? Also, is there going to be zombies? Personally, I don't think you can go wrong with a few zombies, but don't over do it.
    Also, make sure you have continuity, you're doing damn good with that in the ARAAT series, but you can easily miss a beat and end up falling down the stairs.
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    I just thought of something....
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    Zombie rape....
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    Umm... Anyways... That was a, umm... Right...
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    Well, for now I have nothing else to say but...
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    Semper phi, carry on...
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