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Reviews for Twisted Affair

By : Yaoichi
  • From reishicolleen on February 28, 2009
    oooh...please update! i want to know what happens next! will jin be able to save his bitch? but then again kazuya won't give him back easily...oooh....i want to know!!!
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  • From knifelon on February 15, 2009
    Update please! Y__Y ( BEG!! )
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  • From MMishima on August 08, 2007
    A fantastic chapter!!! What a great gift to scan the fics and find this update!!

    I completely love the personality conflict we are seeing in Hwoarang. The lovely double edged sword of getting what you want...and wondering if finally having it...is really worth the sacrifice. In this case, it is the "offering" of his true self in exchange for a "limitted" version of desire. Can you sacrifice the self? Can you face up to the reflection in the mirror when the realization hits you that the leverage has shifted and your not in control, even equal in the exchange? What makes it best of all is how the ones you love, closest to you...point these things out in bright neon lights....

    Sorry for waxing philosophical but damn that is really so well written it makes me feel the inner conflict. It is so completely believable, even down to Jins distant reaction. I cant wait, update soon, please!
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  • From MMishima on April 19, 2007
    I apologize for not leaving a comment last chapter. Time is the enemy when dealing with the real world. The last chapter was deliciously angsty and I really love the way the both of you have managed to match mamipulation for manipulation...giving Jin and Hwoarang both such interesting and individual aura's...even the Koreans surrender was deliciously forethought.

    Now this chapter raises the eye. Kazuya that naughty boy. It would make sense that what entices Jin would entice the Father. What a wonderful way to ultimately destroy the son...as to claim something he covets so perfectly. The dialogue was great...that half barter on both sides. Leaves the mind exploring just how its going to work itself out.

    And then, of course, you have the new and interesting angle...of Kazuya and Hwoarang...and the possible temptation. The Elder Mishima...sadist extrodinaire....and the young Korean...obediant, attention craving masochist. It shows a seldom forwarded fact...that Hwoarang is quite the opportunist. And that opportunity mingled with Revenge (since Jins normal demeanor is icy, versus his sexual practices which are much more fiery)...could release a landslide of angsty goodness.

    Dont worry, I am still out here reading, just keep on writing!

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  • From ANON - Guthan on March 21, 2007
    Drool! ^^ This story totally swept me away! Your characters come alive and I love it! Last chapter had my heart racing so keep posting..
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  • From MMishima on February 27, 2007
    Hey there! Another excellent chapter...just adding fuel to the fire! Hwoarangs inner monologue regarding Jin...and how inconsequential winning really was to him now shows just how deep he is into Jin. You captured that willful Korean extremely well...he refuses to let even Jin come between the ideal in his head. Bravo!

    I thought it very interesting that Hwoarang was wearing very loose fitting clothing in the woods. He doesnt strike me as the outdoorsy type, well, not in the camping and flyfishing kind of way LOL. So, it makes me wonder one of two things...did Hwoarang sell his clothing to fetch a pretty price to pay for Jins...or...something more dastardly...

    ...did Hwoarang sell the space for bruises on his body in a few orchestrated street matches to make that kind of money so fast? Could that explain the need for loose clothing...something that doesnt cling to his body and add pressure to a few well landed kicks and punches?

    Maybe I am just letting my mind run wild LOL. Eitherway, looking forward to picturing Jin in that little get up Hwoarang purchased for him. :evil gryn:

    I also really enjoyed the subtle innuendo that Jin actually seems to meditate better when Hwoarang is near..or has been near to him. Is it possible the Blood Talon gives off a quintessant energy that feeds Jins own? Hwoarangs leo fire meets Jins cancer tidal waves. Lots of smoke...smoke used to lift the veil of the worlds....

    Alright, I am just a crazy person LOL. Cant wait for the next chap!!
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  • From MMishima on February 21, 2007
    I re-read this fic the other day and I wanted to say, I captured some very subtle and interesting things. The main one being, that everytime Hwoarang gives some form of "uke" behavior, even in a moan or a groan...Jin breathes deep enough for it to be tangible. I really like the subtlety of that. It comes across very powerfully...very in control...and definately very dominant. When is the next chapter coming up? Really anxious to see how things progress.
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  • From MMishima on February 14, 2007
    Great Chapter! The interactions were fantastic and the visualization was clear as day. I really like the way this is turning out and I look forward to another chap!
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  • From MMishima on February 01, 2007
    The rabbit hole is getting deeper. I have written Jin as the occassional Top myself and its hard to pull off, but you have done a great job with it. Very believable. Hwoarang is definately cannon, that rough guy act to cover the desire to be 'had'. Next chapter please!
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  • From MMishima on January 29, 2007
    Definately a different angle on the tale. Looking forward to the update and lets see how deep the rabbit hole gets. Pun intended.
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