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Reviews for Lazlo's the man!

By : Torment
  • From JME on November 29, 2007
    This is a great fic and I hope you update soon, this is really interesting. A good subplot is what if Kika actually does get pregnant. heheheh.

    Anyway I would like to see one with Katarina.
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  • From samuraixxx on April 07, 2007
    Silly, daring and great to read. When's the next update?
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  • From Torment on March 09, 2007
    Don't expect any new chapter anytime soon, because I'll be busy with my new PS3 MWAHAHAHAAHA! Still, I would appreciate comments/reviews, and suggestions. I'll occasionally drop by to see if there are any, because I would take them to mind, and think about implementing them in later chapters. Well, so long for now!
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  • From Sethite on March 07, 2007
    Very cool story, I like it. There aren't many good Suikoden IV stories.
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  • From Torment on March 06, 2007
    Dude, that's an awesome idea. I'll get started on it right away. Suikoden II is my favorite game, and the babes are just gorgeous. To have Lazlo run amuck in that world will just be cool. Get ready Vicky, I'm going to make your scream! Thanks Millie Lover!!
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  • From on March 06, 2007
    Laz is certinely the man in this, there's a 'badass' persona that's just enjoyable to read, the erm 'action' scenes are certinely detailed.

    I have one odd suggestion. He can have a great time with Viki that results in him and her flung into the future (afterall viki reacts to anything) and can appear just after suikoden II and before going back to Viki to get him back to his own timeline, he decides to have a little fun while in the future. Lazlo claiming millie perhaps?
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  • From Torment on March 06, 2007
    Thanks! Thanks! Appreciate the review from those who actually reviewed, but god damn dude, if you're just going to say "Do the elf next" I ain't going to do jack-holy-shit for you.

    Here's a word up, the next chapter might focus a bit more on plot development, and less on fucking. It's something I've been slowly easing up on, but not really good at. I will try anyway. I can't promise anything though, because my plans usually don't work out, but something else always will.

    Seeya bitches!
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  • From Streti on March 06, 2007
    A Suikoden IV story, nice! Suikoden IV is seriously underrated. It's fun and the writing's good, liked chaps 3 and 4 especially. I was hoping for more descriptions of the messy cumshots, esp. with Gretchen and Millay. Kika was done good, but it's weird how Lazlo freaks out about the possible pregnancy. Then again, he is young and inexperienced (until now I guess), so maybe he just needs some teaching from some of the ladies. Yeah.
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  • From flame13th on March 06, 2007
    Do the elf next..
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  • From Torment on March 05, 2007
    Thanks for the constructive criticism dude, I needed that. As for the second chapter, you were right. It was rushed, because I wasn't into underage girls. I just wrote that due to a request, and the idea came to mind. As for the Agnes, and Tanya threesome I'll eventually get around to it, but it will take awhile because I have a threesome of my own in works. Be patient. I'm still open to thoughts, and requests. So, stay tune motherfuckers!
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  • From on March 05, 2007
    I still like it, but the second chapter felt a little brief, maybe even forced. Each chapter could maybe be a little more prolonged in the sex, but that's just my preference. Also, it doesn't hurt to write a little more after the sex is done, just to wrap up the chapter. Doesn't have to be anything serious, but the ends are kind of abrupt.

    But hey, I'm only trying to offer constructive criticism, not complain. And is there still any chance on a threesome with Agnes and Tanya?
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  • From Torment on March 05, 2007
    What the fuck, someone's interested in Elenor? Mwahahahaha! She certainly doesn't suit my taste, but I think I can write up some comical situations that revolves around her. But, this doesn't mean I will, I'm just going to think about it. Keep the reviews coming though or else I won't know whether you folks want me to continue adding chapters.
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  • From on February 27, 2007
    Highly enjoyable, would read again.

    I'd love to see a chapter for Mistuba, or a Tanya/Agnes catfight gone wrong (or right, depending on how you think about it)
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