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Reviews for Were we.... Lovers?

By : Meilin1
  • From TeaGirl on March 16, 2008
    ok i would just like to point out that Marluxia is not number 12 but 11. Larxene is 12 xD
    aside from that, i think u have a very smooth story going on here. it's very sweet and fun to read.
    and u know what? ur OC if fine, personally i dont like OCs but the way u introduced her and stuff makes her carry no threat (of overpowering the story) as long as she remains a minor character. i mean honestly, Demyx straight? u've gotta be kidding me. that guy screamed gay when he first appeared with his 'dance water dance'. so everyone should just chill and let u write ur story. they dont like it? move on then, everyone here obviously came to read about roxas and axel, so there's no need to get wrapped up in the minor characters affairs. there's a reason why the summary had axel and roxas in it and not the OC.
    that all aside, thanks for the update! i'll be looking forward to many many more!
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  • From legendblade on November 06, 2007
    Is it bad to think that the game would have been more interesting if it had played out like this instead? Not saying the game was boring, but it definitely didn't have enough Roxas in it... :D

    So far, I think it's very nice work. You write well, and it's always refreshing to see a story that is free from grammatical / spelling errors. Really want to read more now, if there was more :)
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  • From Schizy88 on May 07, 2007
    Oooh, I like this story! It's interesting to think about what happened if Roxas rejoined Org.XIII. I like the style in which this was written, and I also like the storyline. Roxas and Axel are so cute together! I'm very curious about Xarnia and the other person (Xev?) too. I can't wait to read more of this! :D
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  • From ShowndraRidge on April 25, 2007
    About what "TheVastOrganizationMemberXenjn" said, if you wanted to take out the OCs you could always replace them with the existing ORGy members, base your story more on Final Mix+. I mean the Nobodies have those portal things now, so you can fight them, you could always say their alive that way. (if you need any info about the portals that you can't find you can ask me)

    And they do have a point... I almost stoped reading cause of the OCs, I normally never read fanfic's with them in it. It really is a great story, I just really don't like Original characters that much...
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  • From ShowndraRidge on April 25, 2007
    Final Mix+ isn't coming over? Your sure? Like there's no way? They finally said it officialy?
    (ignore spelling errors as it is 4am...)
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  • From guzophela on April 24, 2007
    Whoa, adding the mystery characters? Interesting... I'm glad this is going to be longer than 5 chapters; it certainly has the potential to go to at least ten. -waits for next update-
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  • From Falbet on April 20, 2007
    OMG I WANNA READ MORE!!!!! *spazzes out* I love this fic. you really capture their personalities well! *cheers for AxelxRoxas* =3 PLZ update!! [[waiting patiently]] ^_^
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  • From ShowndraRidge on April 10, 2007
    Yay you updated.

    (This may sound a little weird, but I was playing KH2+ today and I thought of this fic, it was odd, right in the middle of the Roxas/Axel fight I couldn't help but think about how differnt the game would be if Roxas had gone with him, then I thought of this story. I guess it's a sign that an author has the reader really hooked when they just suddenly think of a story.)
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  • From on April 09, 2007
    Great job on chapter two! gotta love cold rooms and warm pyros lol Please update soon! You've done really well so far.
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  • From HappyDragon on April 09, 2007
    ::Chants 'Update, update, update.' in the background.::

    ~__~;;;; Why'd ya stop there?!?!?

    So, can we have more of this uber-cute!fic?
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  • From DaughterOfTheDarkness on April 09, 2007
    Aww!!!!!
    I love this story, and I really hope you continue it.
    And I love the image I get of Axel in flame-accented pj pants, too :)
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  • From LadyDraculea on April 08, 2007
    Boya! I've been waiting for an update, so don't keep us waiting for long! I demand more since I seem to have a horrible time finding fics that are not AU, that is, not something like highschool fics (hate those) and such. *nod*

    Update soon,
    Lady D
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  • From HappyDragon on March 23, 2007
    Hmmm . . . this looks like it has potential. I smell angst and cuteness!

    Ah, right now, there isn’t enough here for me to do a major review of, but I’d love to see more of this so that I can give a full review.

    Still, it looks like you’ll be going slow with this, which is perfect. Buildups always make lemons ‘taste’ better. XD

    Good Luck with this! I hope to being seeing more of it.
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  • From guzophela on March 22, 2007
    Best. Ever. Please continue. :D
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