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Reviews for Puff-Puff!

By : angrywhiteboy43
  • From ANON - Simon Frasier on December 23, 2015
    Someone please continue this story... or at least RP a Dragon quest Witch with me...
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  • From Riot Storm on October 20, 2007
    That was really great. Very descriptive writing and it was totally hot. Good stuff. If there is a second chapter I'll be sure to check it out.
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  • From ricobanderas9 on March 31, 2007
    Oh shit. Oh shit oh shit oh shit!!!

    Wowww... that is quite possibly the only story I have ever, ever read that embodies what I like, and why I write. You are brilliant. Your style is great and descriptive, the characterization is great, and there is focus on the actual induction (which doesn't happen a lot with other game mc stories). I really, really liked how you said "the words that would seal his fate" and then wrote puff puff, and not just that, she used it OVER AND OVER. All of it, very teasing, very good. I'm so impressed, I give it a 10.
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  • From TheSky on March 29, 2007
    Fucking excellent. It is your duty to write more stories.
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