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Reviews for Suikoden V - Bathing in Sunlight

By : Streti
  • From ANON - lemonader on July 29, 2010
    This is probably my favorite story on this site. Just sayin....
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  • From ANON - ghost of on August 15, 2007
    Never really been intrigued by Lorelai, I can't recall Zweig's face and I find Killey annoying in the game, but somehow I still enjoyed their scene. Perhaps it's their competetive and harsh relation to one another that makes it hot. Logg's interest in Bernadette is nicely evolved through the reference to "Bathing in the moonlight" and it makes their intercourse more intense. You can tell that he adores her. But who wouldn't love to see Bernadette covered in spunk anyway.. Roy and Faroush sandwiching Kisara is such a fucking bliss! I just love your description of how her body is being squeezed between the two teens and in the beginning, how she starts working them both at the same time underwater. The double paizuri (good clean-flashback..) is also ace and the cumshots ever so hot.
    If that's not enough, the fantastic epilogue at the end is the icing on the cake!
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  • From ANON - flame13th on July 19, 2007
    Wowie.. Your fiction never failed to amused me, ones that I have read that is. This is a good one I have to say. Hey, would you mind of doing Faroush/Bernadette and Faroush/Cathari?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2007
    I love this story. It's one of my favorites.
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  • From Streti on April 09, 2007
    Thanks for the suggestion, I haven't really thought about it. Really, I draw complete blanks when thinking about potential non-consensual situations. I guess you have read my Fire Emblem story Payback? I've read Good to be King, and liked it, too, but out of the couple of dozen story ideas I have, only one is a potentially non-consensual one, and it's not high on my priority. I've taken note of your suggestion and will consider it, but the story ideas I have simply don't lead to NC situations.
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  • From ANON - omaesan on April 09, 2007
    It's me again. I wanted to write a longer suggestion, since the last time I was writing with a PSP and that's a pain in the ass.

    It occurred me that you never wrote non consensual fanfics. Yes, I know, I also like my heroines eager to please and as slutty as possible, which is perfect for the consensual stories you write. But think of it another way. Writing a non-con fanfic just broad your choices of arguments a lot more. You were struggling not long ago because you felt without new ideas, this can enhance your creativity greatly. It hasn't to be very rough for the ladies, you could traverse the well known path of reluctance at first and giving it up later, or the impossible to contain urges, or the mind controlling way... The plots could vary from the heroine capture and abuse by her captors, the ambush by a group of horny warriors/thieves, the blackmail to protect a loved one/country/asset, the common peasants enjoying their beautiful warrior captain/ princess... there are lots of possibilities.

    Please, consider it.

    Also I'd like to point you to two fanfics I recently liked:
    http://www.t-s-s-a.com/stories/show-story.php?story=FFX2-GoodToBeKing.txt
    Too easy on the descriptions, but the main idea is very appealing.

    http://www.t-s-s-a.com/stories/show-story.php?story=FFX2-LeBlancsArena.txt
    Another way of non-con at first that turns to hot fun later. Contains bestiality. Lots.
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  • From ANON - Legend05 on April 06, 2007
    Another great fic, Streti. Glad to see Bernadette and Lorelai getting in on some of the action, since they aren't too common in among stories. Another I'd like to see that isn't often written about is Lucretia. I also believe that Jean would be a good addition as well, but then again, when is she ever not? Again great fic, and thanks for taking the time to write it.
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  • From Streti on April 03, 2007
    Thanks for the reviews, you two. :)

    You're right that I don't pay attention to the penii. I've tried to address that a little in the second chapter, but it doesn't go with my style. The way in which they sit in the bath in the game has indeed been carried out here, although I was somewhat vague in giving their exact places, so it can be a little disorienting. You might take it as a matter of custom, and the positions also tell a little about their relationships.

    I actually considered all of the women you mentioned, excluding Hizuki (don't remember her), but the trouble was that I wanted to create groups and pairings, which eventually discounted all of them, because there were no suitable male partners for the purposes of the story. A lot of women didn't make it because I would have liked to see them with Faroush, who was already reserved for Kisara, like Luserina. As for Jeane... she might yet appear in a story of mine.
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  • From Fire37 on April 02, 2007
    Very good...glad to see you back in action, Streti.

    This is such a tease... There were many enjoyable images here. Kisara sitting between Roy and Faroush...stroking their members. I liked the way Bernadette was reluctant but eventually gave in to Logg's probing finger. I'm glad you put something about the treasure hunters' relationship, I'd love to hear more. Roy and Faroush stroking themselves off on to Kisara was hot...especially enjoyed the differences in each...Roy jerking furiously yet the Prince subdued.

    I wish you'd take some time to describe the male's members. You give Logg one descriptor but the rest our missing. I find that important in visualizing the scene but probably more so than most would.

    I'm somewhat confused as to everyone's spatial location compared to each other. References to stuff going on behind the treasure hunters not jiving with my automatic assumptions. I assume their sitting around facing each other as if it was the square indoor baths. Actually now that I think about it, in the game they very mechanically sit equally distant from each other all facing one direction in two rows. That seems rather strange to continue into a story.

    Oh ideas huh?

    I'd love to see the return of your Jeane. I loved her in your other story. No need for her to be the controller she is in mine but I loved her confident sexy manner. I'd love to see if maybe she's turned one of our suikoden 5 females into a playmate much like Raura. Ideas for which one...Linfa comes to mind...it occurs to me that she would gravitate towards Jeane a fellow card player. I could see Jeane uping the stakes in a gambling game betting the Linfa to be her sex slave or something like that. Other women include Haswar, Hizuki, Isabel and Urda...Just seeing Jeane embarrass these women as most of them are uptight. Haswar, I'd just love to see.

    Anyway..glad to see you back, Streti. Your writing is excellent as usual.



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  • From ANON - omaesan on April 02, 2007
    hot hot hot! a little short, isn't it? I like the setting. Next chapter soon pleaaaase!
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