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Reviews for Closer than Brothers

By : Garlyle
  • From IdeaofEvil on January 09, 2009
    Haylo was right about the milk brothers except that it was Wolt's mother Rebecca who was the nurse.
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  • From RockWeaver on June 17, 2007
    I really liked your story, and the interactions in between Wolt and Roy. (I'm a huge fan of the Fire Emblem series, but have never played this one)

    Anyway, I really just did this to tell you something. You do know what 'milk brothers' really means, right? They were both breast-fed from the same woman as babies? (I think it was Lilina)
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  • From WotanAnubis on April 22, 2007
    McBob, don't be a dick. Just because you don't like yaoi doesn't mean everybody has to stop writing what they want to write and start writing what you want to see written. In fact, your childish outburst might inspire me to write some yaoi, even though I'm strictly yuri-only.

    Anyways, about the fic itself...

    Like I said, yaoi's not my thing, so I don't have much to say about the actual sex scene or the Roy and Wolt dynamic. They were decently written and I would probably have enjoyed them more if I enjoyed yaoi.

    That said, I do have two minor criticisms and both are just personal nitpicks:
    First, the story could do with a few more line breaks. It's a bit "Huge Wall Of Text"-y, though you are certainly not the worst offender I've ever seen. But that's a matter of personal taste.
    Second, the use of "-sama". Roy and Wolt are not Japanese and anyways, Elibe is based mostly on Europe (with the possible exception of Sacae). Using something like "My Lord" would be far more befitting the setting and characters than this 'English-with-random-Japanese-thrown-in'. But again, that's just my preference.
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  • From MrMcBob on April 21, 2007
    Oh joy. MORE yaoi. Because there isn't enough already. Why must you clog the section with it? Even if it says "don't like, don't read", do you know how excited a person gets when they see there are new entries for this section? Then they find out the new stories are MORE YAOI! It just isn't fair.
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