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By : TeaRoses
  • From PyramidHead316 on May 09, 2007
    That was a nice story. It wasn't as intense as some of the stuff you see around here, but that's part of its charm. I like how you formed a bond between Cynthia and Eileen despite these two never meeting in the game. It gives a sense of everyone being connected - Cynthia, Henry and Eileen at least, and I think it add something to the backdrop of SH4. It's also a very poignant fic, with Eileen having to fight and incapacitate Cynthia after her transformation.

    I think it could be expanded a little more. I would certainly like to see more of Cynthia and Eileen's intimate times together; maybe get inside Eileen's head a little more, and maybe just a tiny bit more insight into Cynthia. But as it stands, I think it's a decent little story. It's quite different from anything else I've seen, and really, I think Cynthia is the only sympathetic ghost in the game. Andrew and Richard deserved what they got (at least Andrew did, though Richard was a big prick), and Jasper was obsessed with the cult - he was going to run into trouble sooner or later. But Cynthia was just at the wrong place at the wrong time when she met Walter all those years before.

    Good job.

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  • From empnorton2 on May 08, 2007
    Elegantly and intelligently written. There needs to be more of this kind of thing not just here, but anywhere. Nice work.
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