Click Here!

Reviews for All the Girls Like Ike

By : EclipseCannon
  • From ANON - who_needs_one on July 13, 2007
    Looking good. Keep it up.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2007
    Purely awesome.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ... on June 11, 2007
    MOAR! MOAR!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anonymous on May 27, 2007
    I'm enjoying your shameless lemon fic; there is far too much yaoi on this site, which sickens me...literally. For that, you are a godsend. Overall, your story is well-written. There is the prior stated apostrophe problem and other minor errors, but they've been ignorable so far. I eagerly await IkexElincia, so keep up the good work.
    Report Review

  • From WotanAnubis on May 24, 2007
    17 girls. Let's think about this.

    If I'm not mistaken, there are 20 girls featured more or less prominently in the game and 14 of those fight in the army (including Ena). I'm going to assume that those 14 will all get it on with Ike at some point.

    That leaves six more women, only three of whom will get a chapter in this fic: Sanaki, Sigrun, Petrine, Aimee, Leanne and Red-Haired Tutorial Girl Whose Name I Can Never Remember. I think it's fairly safe to say that Tutorial Girl won't make it. It's very much canon that Aimee really wants to get into Ike's pants, but it's equally canon that Ike wants Aimee to stay out of his pants, so this one can go either way. Petrine, of course, is an enemy, but she's also pretty hot and this is a shameless lemon fanfic, so anything can happen. Sanaki is pretty young, but considering Mist will be banging her brother at some point (otherwise what's that 'Inc' tag for?) that may be not too much of an issue.

    So here's my prediction: Titania, Mia, Ilyana, Mist, Marcia, Lethe, Nephenee, Jill, Astrid, Tanith, Calill, Lucia, Elincia, Ena, Sigrun, Leanne and Aimee. I'm not sure about Aimee, she might get swapped out for Petrine, but I'm reasonably sure about the rest.

    And now that I've taken up so much time with my pointless rambling, perhaps I should actually say something about the fic itself.

    It's het, which isn't much my thing, and Ike wouldn't be my first choice for the main character in a het fic either. So clearly this fic isn't really for me.

    Mostly, it's competently done, but you have an obvious apostrophe problem. The whole your/you're thing sometimes crops up, and I think I remember seeing a "her's" at some point.

    Furthermore, I don't really like the lay-out. This is a completely personal thing, so no need to pay it too much attention, but still. There are huge spaces between the lines of dialogue, which is fine. But when the sex starts, there're these huge blocks of text that hardly ever get broken up. Suddenly, all that space is gone, replaced by... huge blocks of text. It all looks a bit clunky to me. But like I said, that's my pet peeve, no need to pay it much attention.

    So, I guess that's about all and... keep up the good work.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ... on May 23, 2007
    Finally. It's about time something like this came. And you're great at writing.

    Could you post a list of the girls? I'd like to know who the girls are.Who know, maybe people will ask you to add certain girls if some of them they want aren't here.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on May 21, 2007
    Hmm, very interesting series you have going on here, the lemons are short, but that doesn't bother me, the way you get them into the situations where it happens is what i find VERY good indeed. Can't wait for the next one, especially one involving Ike/Lethe, i've always been a big fan of that pairing, but very few actually do it.

    Anyways, hope to read more soon!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Al on May 21, 2007
    Good so far. Will you do any girls that don't actually join the group? I'm thinking Sigrun...
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on May 21, 2007
    is good. yeah. not much else to say.....i mean, it's better than most of the crap i see on the kingdom hearts section. that's what you'll find in the FE house. quality over quantity. sex was a bit short but hey, that don't bother me. i'm more interested in HOW they got there rather than reading the actual activity.

    so yeah. good shiz. i'm requesting Nephenee.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!