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Reviews for "Rest in Atlantica"

By : JulianDarensia
  • From ANON - Angelalex242 on February 22, 2014
    I still think a follow up fic would be a M/F/F Sora/Kairi/Ariel fic. ;)
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  • From ninesenshi on February 13, 2014
    Very creative. I always assumed mermaids had internal genitalia, but never read a story that presented it like dolphins. Good job.
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  • From JohnSlayer on February 24, 2010
    this story was totally AWESOME!!! I enjoyed reading it very much!
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  • From UzumakiIno on January 13, 2009
    Very nice.
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  • From macrosschick on May 27, 2007
    You write beautifully! I didn't know fish sex could be so erotic. Not to sound stupid, but did you research the mechanics of it, or did you make that up?

    I can't wait to see another story from you.

    H.S.L.

    P.S. If you can do that awesome with a oneshot, I'd love to see how great you deal with a full length story...think about it, won't you?
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  • From HappyDragon on May 27, 2007
    Whatever you do, don’t give up writing! And don’t let lack of reviews for this deter you either--80+% of us fangirls like Boy-Love (yaoi) more than hetero pairings or Girl-Love (yuri).

    Anyway, aside for now and then shifting (and minor shifting at that) between past and present tense, this was beautifully written. And that’s refreshing, as the level/standard of writing for one-shots is . . . lower than for full-out-fiction writing. So be proud of you abilities with prose and detail.

    Now, Ariel was mostly Out-Of-Character in this, but she’d have to be in order for any of it to happen. XD Still, she was OOC in a sensible way. Sora, on the other hand, felt totally In-Character, and I can absolutely see him both wondering why he’s pink, and has a slit down there, along with whether or not he could wield a third keyblade.

    So yeah, this was very cute, and very satisfying to read. And I think the ending is sweet with Ariel commenting on how much he loves Kairi--that was another nice touch, no mater how lost in passion he is, he still think of Kairi.
    Good Luck with future fics!
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