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Reviews for Waiting for You

By : Hitoshirezu69
  • From ANON - Dreamfool on July 26, 2007
    I havn't started KH2 yet (hell, i havn't finished one) but this is my opinion. I think you should combine 1 and 3, with a little bit of 2 (just for the lemon bits).


    Riku should get all mad at Sora, without losing all love for but Riku should think he has. His anger turns even more sour as he starts to have nightmares about Sora finding someone else and/or Sora dieing. Meanwhile Sora tries to find Riku, but as time goes he begins to lose hope and believe that Riku hates him. then Axel or who ever (remember, no KH2 knowledge) and helps to revive his faith.

    Then somehow Riku gets free (lets say evil shadowy forces), finds Axel and Sora, gets jealous, draws the wrong conclusion, and begins to battle Axel. meanwhile before mention shadowy forces real intent is to do something bad to Sora and takes the chance while Sora is weak (injured by Riku and also hurt emoyionally) take the opportunity to kidnap sora for whatever evil purposes they might have.
    Axel and Riku must now work togeter to save Sora.

    Do what you will with what I just gave you.
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  • From ANON - Tara on June 08, 2007
    A semi-long, slightly angst filled version of number 3, please.
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  • From ANON - Raven on June 08, 2007
    I really like this story so far and as for voting, 1 is too depressing. I wouldn't mind 2 because who doesn't like smut? But I would have to go along with 3 because I love plot almost as much as I love smut XD
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  • From HappyDragon on June 07, 2007
    Ah! I thought I had read the start of this before . . . . you did it under your other name x_Hitoshirezu_x, with the title ‘Shadows of Me’. It’s hiding out on pg. 35 of the 42 pages of achieves in this section.

    Anywuzzle, glad to see you’ve picked this back up with some modifications. Mind you, you forgot to put in the endnotes to explain the little notes you made in the chapter--1 about the game, and 1 about Sora’s sibling. Other than that, this looks like a pretty solid start.

    Now for my vote:

    1) O.o? This has a bunch of potential, but it’s sort of against Riku’s character to loath the outside world, he’s quicker to loath himself for being a part of what made things go so wrong. Also, I’m a sucker for happy ending, so if he lost his heart he’d have to get it back again later. Also, you made mention of Castle Oblivion, and if things played out a little like they did in the game, then he’d know that giving over to the darkness completely is a bad thing. . . . . But I do like Sora meeting up with Axel and the two of them traveling together (Especially if Axel keeps trying to draw Roxas out of him)

    2)Yes, sex is nice, but I’m a suck for long stories filled with plot. So unlike the ‘Maybe, but with some stipulations’ of above, this gets a total ‘No’ vote from me. I want my porn, but I want it with plot damnit!

    3) Edgy, dangerous, and the most likely way for things to go cannon wise (wait, since when did I care about cannon?! Well IC-ness, yes, but cannon?!?!). Sora is in a position to get easily depressed, and that depression could easily resonate with Riku to the point where he can subconsciously feel that something is really wrong with Sora. Now if you could just have Riku run into Axel and have them go looking for the brunet together, that’d be uber! And then, while Sora is spiraling downwards into depression, Roxas might have to exert some control now and again to keep him from committing suicide. And if he does that, it brings him closer to the surface, easier for Axel to find him. Then you get a whole new problem of making both Riku and Axel happy, because what the hell can be done to save Roxas from Sora?

    Sorry . . . . I think too much. ^.^;; So I vote 3.
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  • From ANON - Dragon Rose on June 07, 2007
    The story is really good so far. I can't wait until you finish it. I vote 2 or 3. The first one is two depressing
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  • From DaughterOfTheDarkness on June 07, 2007
    I really like this so far.
    Personally, I'm torn between numbers 2 and 3.
    2 because...well...who doesn't love kinky buttsex?
    XD
    3 because it seems like a logical but interesting route for the story to take.
    Those are my picks, and I hope you update soon!
    ^_^
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