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Reviews for New Feelings

By : RockWeaver
  • From WotanAnubis on June 21, 2007
    Nice little fic. Well written. And Sain's dialogue was a delight to read, as good Sain dialogue always is. Though I do admit my eyes glazed over once the kissing started. Yaoi's just not my thing.

    What did jump out at me, though, was how Sain was his usual flirtatious self around the ladies at the start of the fic, and then, mere hours later, seriously contemplates his lack of attraction to the fairer sex. For me the jump from Sain wondering why girls don't like him to him wondering why he doesn't like girls was a bit too big and sudden.

    Also, I'm a bit ambiguous about Rebecca trying to shoot Sain in the head. Could be I'm just ridiculously sensitive due to overexposure to the kind of insane yaoi fangirls that bash all female characters for being female (and get in the way of the hot man sex), but it really did seem like kind of an extreme reaction from the normally cheerful green-haired archer girl.

    Anyways, that's about it. Hope to see you write more in the future.
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