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Reviews for Ninja Practice

By : Chaste
  • From HexElf on March 25, 2010
    Very good! Especially the dialog going on between the girls there.
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  • From EddieTheLightbringer on October 22, 2009
    Your grammar, spelling and punctuation need work. Multiple typos, an obvious lack of a comma in a sentence that really needed it... yeah, try running this through whatever Word Processor you use, do a a spell check, get a friend to proofread.
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  • From UzumakiIno on April 07, 2008
    Pretty damn good.
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  • From Simmerl on December 11, 2007
    Absolutely awesome!

    I just love the domination play between Kasumi and Ayane.

    Really, don't get discouraged just because the majority of people who frequent here want to read yaoi and are going to ignore your story.
    I think it's one of the best fics, not only in the DOA section but in all of AFF.

    Thanks a bunch! :D
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  • From play2dabone on June 20, 2007
    More Kasumi/Ayane incest please!!! There isn't enough lemons featuring the two. Update soon. Nice work by the way.
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  • From Simmerl on June 19, 2007
    OMFG
    Best Kasumi/Ayane fic I've read so far.
    And I truly love that pairing.

    Awesome work!
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