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Reviews for For the Prosperity of Aquor

By : MDragonspell
  • From ANON - Konoha'sYellowFlash on February 12, 2012
    Great chapter like always Myst-san! So sorry I haven't been reviewing lately. >.< School just started again for me. Dx Anyways, so glad to see Clair again. I missed Elicor II. xD Keep up the amazing work!
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  • From ANON - Konoha'sYellowFlash on January 10, 2012
    Great chapter. I was missing those lemons of yours. xD I don't know what "Seesaw" is going on about. I think you made Nel really in character. Keep up the great work!
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  • From FatalMars on January 08, 2012
    Ya ya ya! I actually went and did some Nel research and watched some clips. You are right about Nel and I appreciated your insight. I haven't played the game since it first came out, but I pulled out the old PS2 on Christmas and started in on the game. I love this pairing and you scenes between them are wonderful and awe inspiring. I am learning some things as well, which I hope I can try out :)
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  • From ANON - Seesaw on January 02, 2012
    I truly dislike your Nel. You write her way too effusive and willing. You may have the ”surface personality” down, but there are serious flaws in the most important aspects of her personality that you alter to make it fit your story. Nel's work is her everything, her entire life, her inspiration and her obsession, it would take more than a simple fling to get her to even think about romance. Not to mention, I seriously doubt that Nel would have sex just to relieve tension. She's definitely not that shallow, nor interested in carnal knowledge to the extent you make her out to be. Something that goes against her countries or comrades would seriously distress her to the point of exasperation, not just a simple ”Oh I feel bad about this”. There was problems with this story from the very beginning, and even as I forced myself to read it a little further never once could I imagine Nel doing or saying anything that you have her do. All in all, I am very disappointed with this unoriginal plot and your merger representation of what is originally, a very dedecated and independent female character.
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  • From ANON - Konoha'sYellowFlash on December 31, 2011
    Great chapter! I love the Albel and Nel moments. It's so adorable. Loled at Sophia attempt to help Nel out. xD Oh, and HAPPY NEW YEAR hope you have a great one! :)
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  • From FatalMars on December 29, 2011
    Oh no! I was sad to not see another chapter. I really adore Al/Nel pairing. It is one of the few pairings in a video game I actually adore. I loved reading this. It has taken me a couple of days to make it through all of the chapters, but I have. I must say I am exctied to see whats next. I enjoy the sex scenes immensely as well. There is always something new and delicious to look forward to, which makes me happy. I actually like how Albel has panned our he is very believable. I was a little shocked to see Nel submitting so easily to Albel. I guess I see her as more militant and hard, but I guess I forgot she has emotions. I can't wait to read more I am shocked at how mad I was at the cliffy. BOOOOOO I want more, but enjoy the holidays!
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  • From ANON - Konoha'sYellowFlash on December 25, 2011
    MERRY CHRISTMAS MYST-SAN!!! xD
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  • From ANON - Konoha'sYellowFlash on December 15, 2011
    Woot! Both of them are coming along for the adventure! xD
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  • From ANON - Konoha'sYellowFlash on December 01, 2011
    I liked this chapter. It was great to read. Ooo, Adray founded out. xD Can't wait for the next one~
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  • From ANON - Konoha'sYellowFlash on November 18, 2011
    Aw, Albel is moving forward for Nel! >o< So cute. I laughed when Nel punched Albel. Lalala. ^O^ Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Konoha'sYellowFlash on November 09, 2011
    This chapter was really good. I really enjoyed reading it. :D Everyone guessing who's Albel's wife is was funny. Albel and Adray getting along made me smile. :) Great job Myst-san!
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  • From ANON - Numa on November 01, 2011
    Peanut allergy? Nope, never crossed my mind. Never met anyone with that type of allergy anyways. Totally stumped! Although, I am interested to know what would happen if Nel were to end up pregnant. A really cute baby to be sure. Thank you for a good read.
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  • From ANON - Numa on October 26, 2011
    For Chapter 16, my guess would be she is experiencing a fake pregnancy. Its definitely too early to have vomiting. However if the body is going through a fake pregnancy, the symptoms would clump altogether. Lack of period, hormonal imbalance, vomiting, tenderness and perhaps later on even lactation?
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  • From ANON - Konoha'sYellowFlash on October 17, 2011
    Great chapter! Really enjoy reading it. :D I love how Albel is concern about Nel. It's cute. ^o^ I'm going with Nel is pregnant. She's not food poisoned.. she could be poison by a monster and she can't be sick? But she was using the contraceptives that Albel had gotten for her.. but like Albel said if you leave it near the heat for too long than it won't work! D: I'm still going with she's 'pregnant'! I have a feeling the dragon-bride-rune thing is kinda involve in this somehow.. :)
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  • From ANON - MoonAlpocalypse 07 on October 11, 2011
    nel has food poisoning great chapter btw
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