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Reviews for The Legion - Lyelleth & Orannis

By : silverwynd
  • From xCubicZirconia on June 10, 2011
    o.o Please tell me you're going to finish this fanfiction! Dying to know what happens next!
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  • From Redmaple on September 03, 2009
    Update soon? Ja?
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  • From ileyna on April 17, 2008
    So uh, I demand an update or I will throw things. I loves these two, I want to see more,

    loves,
    iley
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  • From Verisimility on December 16, 2007
    Oh god, you MUST continue this! I love it. Leaving it on such a cliffhanger is punishment for us. :(
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  • From lessthanthree on December 05, 2007
    This story? = The Awesome. I require more.

    Your writing is full, rich, and clear. You do dialog and exposition very well. Its easy to read and I connect with the characters well.

    As some constructive criticism, I think you could work on action a bit more. No, not THAT kind of action, that kind is perfectly fine ;).This is mostly in reference to the start of the chapter when they go to Moonglade. It was very confusing to follow what was happening, where they were, and who was saying what. Im also not quite sure HOW they got there.... In any event, you picked right up after that confusing start so no harm done, but I just wanted to share my thoughts. :)
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  • From Inamoto on November 22, 2007
    This story is very good and I really like you to continue with the greatness
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  • From rayford on November 13, 2007
    I like. Rockin chapter, and I can't wait for more! :D
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  • From AntiDolorifico on November 12, 2007
    OH GOD I LOVE YOU. Srsly. Thank you so much for dedicating that chapter to me... ahh, yum, yum. Sorry for taking so long, my presence on these internets has been scarce for quite some time. But don't think I've forgotten about this story! I've caught up on the chapters I've missed, and now I am going to read them again. And again. Mohaha!
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  • From rayford on October 30, 2007
    I've gotta say, this is one kick ass story. Well done! I look forward to the next chapter. ( :
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  • From ileyna on October 21, 2007
    Oooo, Wonderful! You always deliver such delightful chapters! I love it because I may have a great love of night elves but I don't fancy the factions of the Alliance one bit. The Horde have such honor that I think most people don't see. Instead they look uppon them and view them as savage brutes. Your story helps to show the honor of an orc and I love it!

    I apologize if I ramble, it's a fault I am well aware of! But I see you put up ThrallxJaina love and I must go read it!

    And thanks for being my first Chp. 11 review! I will update soon, especially if you're going to hold out more of your wonders otherwise!

    Mwah!
    iley
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  • From ileyna on October 21, 2007
    Oh my god! It ate my first review!

    So here it is all rehashed! Argh!

    :D Sorry it took me ages to review! I love this story, I hope to see more soon. (Like I should talk, I'm queen of long update breaks, eep!)
    Any who, I love your work and can't wait to read more!

    And ThrallxJaina?! I love the ThrallxJaina pairing! If you need incentive, um, I triple dog dare ya! ;P

    I'm so flattered that you like my work!

    *hug*
    ileyna


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  • From Fawnheart on October 19, 2007
    oh HERE you are! I think this is one of the first stories that I read when I first found this sight, before I even thought to have a go myself, and YOU are responsible for starting my Orc fetish! *scowls! I was so happy when I clicked on this and recognised it, are you the author who said WOW is like crack? That was my only lead to remembering where this was and I just didn't have time to re-read everything, so many good stories again! But I am STOKED that you have updated, I love the story, love the pairing, love the all but hypnotic way that you write, not to mention your creativity and origniality..."moontouched"? What a brilliant concept! I don't understand fully what it is yet, but I have no doubt that all will be revealed as you continue. I wish I could bookmark this so that I don't lose it again! Maybe I'm going to have to brave my pc illiteracy and figure out how to do that recommended reading list thing after all.... O.o. Anyway, I love it! I am simply HANGING for more! Soon, please lol. I haven't done Gruul myself yet, but I'm sure it's over-rated :P it's much much more important that you give us more of the same lol. NO, only joking...sort of... but I do eagerly await.. MORE lol
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  • From ileyna on August 14, 2007
    So I love it! When will you update again? Soon I hope! Mwah!

    ~iley
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  • From Mocaris on August 08, 2007
    Loving the new chapters, and Can't wait for the more. Lovely work. :)
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  • From Tortanus02 on August 07, 2007
    jeebus! you really know how to leave a cliff hanger T_T now write the next one before i go insane! *threatens with the wrath of doom*
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