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Reviews for Shining Force - Battle Companions

By : lemoner
  • From ANON - Martin III on October 15, 2009
    I never thought I might say this, but this is the best of the Shining Force fics on this site thus far.

    It's true that the characters are one-dimensional, the sex bits are perverse and pointless, and there's no real plot, but that's true of the other two Shining Force fics on this site as well. And unlike the others, "Battle Companions" isn't completely disrespectful to the characters, has a mildly entertaining setup, and is more amusing than disturbing in its sexual descriptions. Even calling Tao "human" is a mild offense compared to the errors seen in "Shining Spring"(which was obviously written by someone who hadn't even bothered to play through the whole game!).

    In short, it's an ugly fic, but at least it's not a deliberate attempt to defecate on the characters of Shining Force. And that puts it well above the other two Shining fics on AFF.net.
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  • From ANON - The Pairing Guy on July 11, 2008
    Not bad, not bad. Good and descriptive, and some nice bits of humor. There are no real problems with this fic, just two mistakes:
    1.Tao is not human. She's an elf. How did you miss those ears?
    2.You wrote "Yes her dear centaur friend is fucking her with his fat horse-sized dick and she is enjoying it.", LOL! I assume you meant to write "Yes her dear centaur friend is fucking her like a fat horse-sized dick and she is enjoying it."
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  • From Yumberduddle on September 15, 2007
    my friend just showed me this...its very good! i have a question: woudl u be willing to do a fanfic trade w/me? basically, u'd write a fanfic of a pairing i request, and i'd do the same back 4 u, kinda like us exchanging favors. I have a certain pairing from shining force 1 that i absolutely love (its centaur/human) and u coudl definitely write it well! in exchange i'd write just about any fic u'd want. if ur interested, plz email me at yumberduddle@hotmail.com and we'll talk!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 15, 2007
    Shining Force hentai? Shining Force Centaur x Human hentai? YOU ARE SO AWESOME!
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