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Reviews for For No Apparent Reason

By : Breech_Loader
  • From on September 22, 2007
    Don't understand what the fuss is being raised about.

    This is a deliciously, disturbing story. I'm not sure what to really say. I don't believe it's bad, I personally just want to see where exactly it's going. I feel incrediably sorry for Sonic and even for Knuckles for being so...well...Knuckles. Though Sonic's additude towards homosexuals could stand to be improved. Will Tails or the other fits somehow into the story? (Not in a sexual manner really.)
    I look forward to your new update as I want to see what happens next.
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  • From Samantha1984 on September 19, 2007
    I think the next chapter should be about how Sonic deals with the pain of getting raped twice. The first two chapter was mostly about him getting raped nonstop and I think you should lay off the rape in the next chapter and just focus on how Sonic deal with it.
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  • From Imrix on September 19, 2007
    First off, it occurs that a mix of the two themes might be best, from my view. Him dealing with being raped, and perhaps the occaasional bit more of smut. Really, though, I'm not too bothered on the smut.

    I have to say, I like this. Knuckles comes off as a decent, believable guy who really didn't realize quite how badly he screwed up. And still doesn't. He has that semi-childish quality of believing saying sorry is enough.

    Shadow though... Something I WOULD like to see, is a chapter done from his point of view, to explore what kind of mindset actually acts like that. If he actually believes the crap he says, or if it's an act, and the motivations behind it.

    Who knows. You might even be able to pull a happy ending.

    ... I just jynxed that possibility to bits, didn't I?

    Although I suppose ARAAT kinda had a happy ending. More of a pyrhhic victory than anything though.
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  • From TeleIce on September 17, 2007
    CONTINUE IT. Please? In any way possible.

    Come on, I signed up here just to review this story (for the most part)! XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2007
    Welp, looks like HQH is back on the hardcore blood-and-vomit-soaked rape-train to hell once more *decrypts nuclear warhead launch codes*
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  • From Imrix on September 11, 2007
    It's Harley. Ugly is the norm.

    And what is it with you and having Shadow as totally deranged? Jeeze, all the guys got is a lack of social skills and a big case of angst...

    In any case, nice work I guess, although it did seem a little out of the blue. I mean... Exactly why does Shadows understanding of the concept of "friends" go immediately to sex, willing or not?
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  • From Homersimpson69 on September 10, 2007
    This is gonna get pretty ugly i bet.
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