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Reviews for A Sliver Of Light

By : MelonBear
  • From ANON - The Ambassador on January 07, 2009
    Second chapter was a little better but your still having the same problem. Very interestded to see where this is going your doing a good job thus far. Hope everything works out ok with your surgery so you can pick this up again soon.
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  • From ANON - The Ambassador on January 07, 2009
    Your story concept is very good and the you do a great job of getting it across on paper. The only problem I see is that sometimes you say the same thing twice, making it a little redundant. This sory is good, but with a little proof reading and editing it could be great. Keep up the good work ;)
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  • From acky on December 19, 2008
    I like it. Interested in reading more
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 19, 2008
    Unfortunateley, no ideas to help you come to mind, all I can say is that this fic is really good. Would greatly appreciate it if this story was continued. P.S. i know this is a lame review, but i'm not used to reviewing.
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  • From ANON - dragoonice on January 08, 2008
    Please Continue. I Like Where This is Going And Im sick And Tired Of All the Yaoi Everywhere. Unfortunately I Cannot Be Your Beta As im Viewing This On my Cell Phone.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 25, 2007
    Very good story, please continue!!!
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  • From Shihazriah on September 14, 2007
    I'm intrigued and would like to see more and to see where you'll take this. I would like you to please update when you get the chance.
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