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Reviews for A Christmas for Two

By : HawkChic
  • From ANON - kyogre on November 14, 2007
    AH... There isn't enough lovely Kratos/Zelos stuff out there. Thank you so much for this. I love it. Too bad about Sheena... I actually really like her too.
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  • From KuraiD on November 07, 2007
    Hm. This is certainly... Interesting.

    The 'bad' part, I think, is that the explanations and how it clicked... happened much too fast. It's so condensed and feels so rushed that it starts to feel out of character. The dynamic between the two redheads, however, stays true enough if they are really involved romantically with each other.

    Xy amuses me, but you can't say that she just contributes to the feeling of rush- though I won't deny that her lines were rather amusing and some made me bang my desk rather hard in LOLWUTLMAO. She's quite cute as well.

    Somehow, I really liked the piano bit. It suits Zelos.

    Overall, I'm very curious to see where this will head for; it's nice to date, but I'm quite sure that it'll just get better from now on. :D Keeping an eye out for this; good luck with the plot bunny in the future.
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  • From Yamiyugikun on October 30, 2007
    I'm such a yaoi fangirl like Xy. Very cute Kratos and Zelos. Please continue, can't wait for lemon^_~
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  • From Yamiyugikun on October 28, 2007
    I enjoyed chapter 1. I like how you added details about everyday life, such as the interior of Zelo's home, the furnature and such. Those small details seem important. Thank you for writing.
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  • From ANON - IceSeraph on October 01, 2007
    i really really like it ,it gives the reader a warm cozzy feeling,cant waitfor ur lemon i feelit will be juicy since the normal love signs rawesome icant imagine how the love making will be yay great job and thumbs up
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