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Reviews for His Body, A Traitor

By : Merci
  • From Siarra on April 02, 2008
    Wow... This is pretty much the ultimate ideal of a solo fic.
    It's incredibly immersive and downright addictive, and this can really be credited to the amazingly real sounding narrative voice. It's in character so well, and conveys all the pent up frustration, lust, denial and the roller coaster ride of tied together thoughts and emotions perfectly, taking it way past the visual of a hot guy with his dick in his hand. It's dirty, nasty, hot and oh so good. The writing style is wonderfully paced, setting just the right mood in all the right places and creating very vivid imagery in the mind.

    ...I can't believe I managed to review this. The first dozen instincts after reading it were unintelligible vowel noises and vague hand motions. The fic just completely blew my mind. And that ending? Is evil and wicked and screams out for a sequel, but in all fairness, it leaves off in a wonderful point. Just a hint of sadness and disappointment, it entices the reader to imagine their own continuation to it. Yeah, it's all pure grade A greatness.
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  • From ainaak on January 13, 2008
    Damn that was hot. /stares off into space drooling/
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  • From Infundibular on December 29, 2007
    That was filthy, filthy and dirty and hot. Especially so considering there was only one participant:P. You know, there really isn’t enough good Tekken smut around. All those hot characters and no action, it’s a travesty. I can’t really think of any criticisms to make; your style is crisp and vivid. I just hope you’ll write more.
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