Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for And So...?

By : insantics
  • From Theocrati on December 03, 2008
    A really beautiful story, I've also read Crowded elevator.
    Uh, I'm no literary expert, but your characters felt true to the original Riku/Sora Hayner/Seifer
    The tenderness in this, in all the characters, is utterly touching. Maybe it's because I'm reading these late at night, tired as hell, but I got sucked into your writing and felt deeply for the characters.
    Top stuff, please keep writing.
    Report Review

  • From HappyDragon on January 04, 2008
    The ending gave me warm fluffy feelings. And long smex scenes are always better.

    Good job on this.
    Report Review

  • From Nyarlathotep23 on December 31, 2007
    Yay!! I have loved the progression of this story so much as I have been reading along. I'm happy now that things have worked out for them *sap* and that was a totally hot sex scene!! *applause* Great story!!
    Report Review

  • From HappyDragon on December 24, 2007
    The formatting woooooooooooooooooooooorked!!!

    Ah, I liked this, and yes it was rushed, but it was logicaly rushed, so it doesn't feel forced. And I love Kairi's observations about the 'Gay Bois' of the island (and that you aren't bashing her, and that she's being all helpful). Kudos to your character profiling of Riku, and mini profiling of Sora and Kairi, I love it when writers get inside their heads.

    Good luck with the family stuffs! & Happy Holidays!
    Report Review

  • From HappyDragon on December 17, 2007
    Wow, quick update. Nice.

    Aw, short, bittersweet, and to the point. I like it.

    Oh! You just have to use HTML codes to get the formatting like italics, bold, and underline at least are possible.

    Okay, you use the “>” and it’s opposite in place of what I’m about to do:

    [i]random stuff[/i], [b]could be anything[/b], [u]your text here[/u]

    Hope that helps!
    Report Review

  • From FireTears on December 17, 2007
    I really enjoyed this chapter, even if the humour was scarce compared to the others.

    I just wanted to make a special note about Sora and Riku's separate mindsets on the relationship they want with each other: Riku loves Sora but he's hesitant, and doesn't understand how Sora could possibly fall in love with him after everything Riku put him through -- he doesn't think he could make Sora happy, either. Sora, on the other hand, loves Riku and is certain that even though Riku isn't in love with him (or so Sora thinks), he could make Riku happy if given half a chance.

    It's just such a perfect contrast, and it suits their personalities so well: Riku, who tends to be practical to the point of cynicism; and Sora, who tends to be idealistic and optimistic, which is exactly the reason he succeeds.

    I really, really love this story, and I wish like hell that AFF.net had a 'favourites' option the way FF.net does. If it does, I haven't found it.


    And I'm sorry that you're feeling down. I know that it's not much help to send you internet hugs, but I am, and I hope you'll be feeling better soon. =] Try watching something mindless and fun, maybe, like a Disney movie? At least, those always cheer me up.
    Report Review

  • From HappyDragon on December 16, 2007
    Rawr, just read parts 4 & 5. Damn this is insanely cute! Ah, and I like how Sora is the one making all the moves, which is really refreshing with all the Seme!Riku must capture his clueless Uke!Sora. So yes, very cute, hope to see them cuddling like bunnies in a chapter/part or 3.

    Good luck with this.
    Report Review

  • From HappyDragon on December 16, 2007
    I like your take on Sarcastic!Riku, GoodFriend!Kairi, and Semi-Ditz!Sora--oh dear god do I love Semi-Ditz!Sora. I was laughing my ass off when he was talking to Tidus, it was just priceless.

    Well, this is cute so far, and I like how you’re going back and forth between the 2 of them, and how you can make them sound very different from each other. I was actually surprised that I was able to tell that it was Sora speaking within the first few words of part 2.

    Anyway, I’ll have to keep up with this little thing, see where it goes.

    Oh, and loved the part where Kairi mentioned her thoughts about being with both the boys at the same time. Made my day. XD (Course it helps that SoRiKai is my OT3)

    Well... on to part 4!
    Report Review

  • From FireTears on December 12, 2007
    Hey, I just wanted to say that this is a really, really sweet story. I love it to pieces, and I'm glad that you seem to be updating on a regular basis. I can't wait for more chapters! Sora and Riku both have very different voices, and I'm impressed that you managed to do that--a lot of people, when they write in first person, tend to make all characters sound the same.

    Poor Tidus, by the way. I hope he ends up happy, too.
    Report Review

  • From FayeV on December 07, 2007
    lol I LOVE THIS SO FAR!!! PLEASE CONTINUE! LOVIN' IT!!! Characterization is just ON POINT!!! Can't wait for Sora!!! Update soon!!! :D
    Report Review

  • From ExtremelyMagical on December 06, 2007
    Continue? 8D

    I really did like this. Seeing Riku's point of view is great. I don't think it's really done enough. Though, Sora's POV is fun too. I dunno...maybe you planned to get in Sora's head in a different story or something.

    I think it'd be great if you continued...or left it as is. It's just refreshing and you wrote really well for not having spell check or anything.

    Awesome job!
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!