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Reviews for Metroid: Rebirth

By : TarnishTear
  • From Roakin2001 on July 19, 2009
    I don't know if still reads these or if you even care, but I don't know if you've seen but I remade your story since you never finshed yours. Someone said I should have ask you frist before posting and he was right but I don't know how to get a hold of you other then this. So anyway read and tell me what you think and if you think I should continue.
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  • From AngelMeiru on February 28, 2009
    How many babies is Samus going to give birth to? Will her children have two mommies? That would be very cute, aliens with two mommies. Hooray for lesbian mothers.

    Please finish this up. I just can't hold my breath much longer.
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  • From ANON - puppitmazter17 on December 29, 2008
    Dido on what Roakin2000 said. Later!
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  • From ANON - Roakin2000 on December 29, 2008
    Dude i don't know if you even read these anymore, but It's been a YEAR since you started this story and I really wanted to see the end of it but ut looks like your never going to do that so I give up I anit going to look for anymore. Kudos to you for making a great story but you just never got around to finsh it. Have a good life and God bless.
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  • From ANON - puppitmazter17 on October 11, 2008
    Com on dude I wan to see the end of this story before the economy collapses.
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  • From ANON - True Metroid fan on August 30, 2008
    When are the others Chapters coming out? We've been waiting for ages, are you working on them write now? Why arnt you doing them now? Do you hate us or something? Could you at least give us a preview of what's to come?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 14, 2008
    PLEASE Finish!!!!!!!!!! This is a work of art and you should definitely continue bringing in new material. I am now and forever shall be a loyal fan to you^_^
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  • From ANON - The Crystal Alchemist on July 24, 2008
    Quite an interesting scenario you have there. Samus the whore...not the most appealing image, but, considering the transformation she's going through not at all unbelievable. It was interesting how you put the story line of where Samus comes from and how she is destine to become this. She is a woman who lost everything at such a young age so she sets out on the path of vengeance, but in the end caused genocide to a species that was just a pawn to the real enemy. In the end she not only redeems herself for what she has done, but also regains the one thing she has lost so long ago. The image where she has become the Queen of the Metroid show her transcending to almost a goddess like state. In all quite an enjoyable fic, although I prefer the romance genre. Hope the epilogue is as great as the prologue.
    Kudos to you my friend!
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  • From jusenkyo on July 13, 2008
    when are you going to update this

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  • From JustS on June 22, 2008
    Glad to see you are still working on this and in touch with your fans.

    Can't wait to see what the future holds for this story :)
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  • From TarnishTear on June 01, 2008
    @Roakin2000

    1)This idea for this story first came to me when I watched Alien 3 and Alien Resurrection years ago. In both these movies, Ripley was pregnant with a Xenomorph queen (she killed herself along with the queen an the end of Alein 3 but her DNA was cloned to bring her and the unborn queen back for Resurrection). Metroid has always had a few stylistic similarities with Alien, so the first thing that popped into my mind was "What if something like this happened to Samus?" Metroid Rebirth is my answer.

    2)Yes, the Senate Hall is a direct rip-off of the one seen in the Star Wars prequels.

    3)Dr. Dalton is an original character, though I got his name from the would-be King of Zeal from Chrono Trigger. Why? Because Chrono Trigger is awesome.

    4) That would be telling.

    5) The events of Metroid Fusion do figure heavily in the plot, but that DNA fusion was only the beginning of Samus' "problem".

    @Everyone else

    My efforts to write this story as I had outlined a few posts above have been stymied by real life. But work is continuing, just much slower than I would like. I haven't forgotten this story. The good news is while I haven't been able to write very much, I have been able to plot it out in my head better, so hopefully I wont need a beta process to keep the storyline coherent. This means chapter released wont have to wait until I finish the whole thing.

    See this space for further details.

    Thanks to everyone for their kinds words. I wont let you down.


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  • From ANON - Roakin2000 on May 31, 2008
    You the more I read over the frist two chapters you made, the more questions I want to ask you not about the story and how it ends but more of the basic questions.

    Frist of chorse should be want gave you the idea to come up with this story? This one really stands out amoung the others.

    Second the grand hall of the Galactic Senate, did you design it to be alot like the one from the Star War Movies?

    Thrid who is Doctor Dalton? Is he a person you made up or is he from one of the over games?

    Fourth when she becomes Queen of the Metroids does she have any new powers?

    Finally was it the Metroid DNA that was put into her from Metroid Fusion cause her to become the Queen of the Metroid or is there more to it then that?

    Well that's all I got to ask and I look foward to seeing how it all turns out. Keep at it man

    Peace.
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  • From ANON - Puppitmazter17 on May 31, 2008
    Finsh the story please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cerebrate Fate on May 24, 2008
    I agree with all the comments posted above. Needs a bit of work on the grammar, however all in all a very good story. I simply cannot wait until the next chapter is out.
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  • From jusenkyo on May 23, 2008
    like it continue
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