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Reviews for Suikoden V - Genso Freyjadour

By : Streti
  • From huotungyi on April 23, 2010
    I absolutely love your stories, Streti. Please, please make another chapter of this. I'd love to see a nice, long Haswar flashback. ^~
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  • From Watcher on January 30, 2010
    Well, I'll write this because you just plain don't get reviewed enough. I though this chapter was okay. It wasn't great, but it wasn't bad by any means.

    I did like the wine drinking, the neat subversion of the usual "How do you want me to pay?" routine, and the storekeeper and his restrained and caring reaction to the lovely Miss Sialeeds, but the rest of it was just too short and pedestrian to get aroused to.

    In short, while I didn't hate this chapter, I do feel it could have been better. Please don't get mad. I only wanted to give out some constructive criticism instead of plopping down a quick "OMFG soo hawt I CAEM!"

    Also, I think cloth should have been clothes in the first few paragraphs, though what you've go works well too.
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  • From terpfen on January 30, 2010
    I told you this already, but Chapter 5 is a most welcome addition. The wait was worth it.

    The contrast between the more enclosed, tightly-knit feeling of the first four chapters and the more open, fleeting behavior in the fifth chapter is a delight. The shift in focus to Sialeeds is enormously enjoyable in its own right, but as a buildup and lead-in to additional kink in future chapter it becomes even more tantalizing. I still think this is one of your all-time best stories, and chapters like this reinforce that belief.

    A true surprise and delight. Excellent job.
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  • From ANON - Randomo on November 26, 2008
    Alright, how much do I have to shell out for you to continue this story? It's too good to end with a teaser.

    Also, the prince/arshtat/sialeeds idea would be awesome.
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  • From ANON - Arthur Vandalay on November 18, 2008
    Oh my God please keep this story going. You are my hero.

    Seriously, nobody writes like you.
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  • From ANON - zefiro on October 27, 2008
    Please continue this. Teasing us with Sialeeds is too much and I do hope the prince takes his aunt up on her previous offer 1st.

    What are the chances of you doing a Prince x Arshtat x Sialeeds only scene?
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  • From ANON - guny on June 02, 2008
    "TO BE CONTINUED..?"

    Please do so. I look forward to another round of your writing with Sialeeds' participation.
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  • From Streti on May 13, 2008
    Thanks for the reviews! This fourth chapter turned out a little differently than even I thought, actually. It might feel somewhat different because it has description at the cost of action. In this way it's shorter on progression and fuller on detail. Indeed, hopefully the long-lasting stamina of the Falenan royal males will be enough to see them through a fifth chapter...

    Haswar I don't think will be appearing... in this story.
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  • From ANON - ghost of J on May 12, 2008
    Wow, you really did manage to top the previous chapters in terms of raunchyness. Yet I find it less intense in a strange way. The opening is something else as the queen certainly takes advantage of her position. The desire and tension between Arshtat and Faroush is yet again beautifully displayed when he masturbates in front of her. Despite it is only a small part of the story it's still among the hottest moments in it so far. Nice messy cumshots as always and the finale is superb! Can't wait for another chapter where my only concern is if there's any spunk left for Syaleeds.

    I really liked the Haswar reference and it makes me curious about the possibility of her appearing aswell. Despite Arshtat's unknown date of birth she's supposedly not that much older. After all it's only 2 years between Haswar and Ferid. ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 05, 2008
    I was a little worried that you might get into some gay stuff, but it turns out I worried for nothing. Great chapter, and I love your descriptions of Arshtat and Lyon.
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  • From ANON - the ghost on February 04, 2008
    Just when I thought this couldn't get any raunchier you surprised me with Ferids appearance. Incredibly hot. Even though a hint of what to come is given through Ferids mind, I still hope that you can surprise me again. It's a pity Lymsleia wasn't a few years older at the time. :P Please share another chapter!

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2008
    Any story with Lyon is at least a little hot, but your writing makes it all the more so. Please keep the chapters coming!
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  • From ANON - Lemon_reader89 on January 29, 2008
    Let's see....I liked the first chapter okay, but chapter 2 is just downright hot. I want to see how this all turns out.

    I love your writing style, Streti. But I wish you'd get a bit more descriptive regarding their bodies.
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  • From ANON - Eh... on January 18, 2008
    I honestly can't wait to see how this story turns out.

    As always, wonderful writing, Sreti.
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  • From ANON - zx on January 10, 2008
    I'm looking forward to some Arshtat x Lyon x Faroush x Sialeeds action. Keep up the great work as always.
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