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Reviews for After Friendship

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  • From ANON - blackcobra on November 22, 2008
    ok i really need an account here :P but any way OMG SMEXY SEX XD hehe very vewry good end to the story
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  • From ANON - blackcobra on November 14, 2008
    OWWWWW i got included in a note cool hehe thank ye any way OOOW HOT SCENE now me need sleep so can dream the scene :P
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  • From frostbite02 on September 18, 2008
    *stares blankly at the screen* ...not nice...dude... I was so all like "YAY JAK/DAX SMUT" and then...nothing. Anywhom I can't wait for the update...I loooves this ficcy ^^
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  • From ANON - AlphaOmegaPsi on August 29, 2008
    ASSFOBHOEWIH!!!! OoO

    Update soon; don't leave me hanging for months please! This story rules!
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  • From Branny on August 24, 2008
    YOU BIG TEASE!!

    I demand hawt hawt Greeny-Blond and Redhead naughtyness!

    I can't wait for the next chapter...you evil girl. xD
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  • From ANON - blackcobra on August 20, 2008
    BAD PLACE NOTHING THAT SCENE WAS HOT TOWARDS THE END I SEE SEX NEXT CHAPPY :P XD
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  • From Branny on August 19, 2008
    Oh man....Cliffhanger of doom!
    I love how you write lil Dax, he is so cute and I love his reactions towards Jak...though I wouldn't mind jusr readubf some Jak on Dax smut! xD

    I really hope you have Jak coming to save lil Dax from himself or something. I love when they hug...every time I read them hugging it makes me wanna hug my boyfriend. X3

    Really can't wait for the update...been awhile now...Guess I'll have to wait like everyone else.

    Branny~
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  • From RockJawzz on July 09, 2008
    Great story. I really love how you did Daxter's personality.
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  • From ANON - Ezj-Key on June 09, 2008
    OMG I missed some chapter updates.
    If I were better at english I could probably
    wrte something really smashing on how awsome
    this story is but alas you hav3e to settle with
    just this. I love this story it's so good and
    well written. Poor little Daxxie but ohhhh
    it's just soo good. As I said earlier...
    Really good reviewer... Love to see where
    this is going and it's really thrilling.
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  • From yeahjesse on June 09, 2008
    Wowwie. Usually, this kind of thing would make me extremely sad, but I'm glad that Daxter avoided being raped. I'm looking forward to seeing Jak's reaction if and when Dax tells him the full extent of what happened. It was very well written--nothing pulled me out of the moment at any point in this chapter. Good job.
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  • From sillyneko345 on June 08, 2008
    Oh, wow. Where do I start?!

    I guess I'll be different and start with the end of the chapter. Angsty as it was, I think that Daxter being forced to defend himself to the very end worked very well here. It shows that he really can make it on his own. He may not like it much (or at all, more likely) but now you've shown that he is not a "damsel in distress" type who relies completely on Jak to come running to the rescue every time he gets himself in a fix. Sure it was sort of an accident when the gun went off, but hey. He didn't just give up and cry and wait for someone to come help him. He had the courage to fight the guy and get ahold of the gun in the first place.

    I do feel for the redhead, though. He's learned a hard lesson about just what it means to carry a gun :( And of course he NEEDED to use it to defend himself. It was that, or be raped and possibly killed. But I guess the shock of actually shooting someone in such a way would still be pretty difficult to take. Human psychology is weird that way, when you know what you did was necessary but you still feel bad for doing it. Even if the person in question was trying to do something horrible to him in the first place, Dax feels guilty for hurting his attacker -- that's a natural reaction.

    Poor Dax. Sometimes doing what you have to do is hard. You did a great job with his emotions there, I think. How he suddenly doesn't want the gun anymore. It almost seems like he went into shock then, as he doesn't even remember how he got home. He still got there, though, so his subconscious must have been paying more attention than he was on all those previous outings with Jak. Still... Makes me want to give him a big hug and steer him back to Jak and Tess -- so they can hug him, too! Maybe next chapter will be a little happier? Or if not outright happy, at least a little calmer. Sounds like Dax just needs to be cuddled and feel like he's safe for a while. Maybe have some hot chocolate? A warm shower, perhaps?

    Anyway. Very nice chapter! Very emotional. Can't wait to see how the story progresses... and to see if Dax will still want to go on Jak's missions with him after this. Maybe being Orange Lightning sitting on the big guy's shoulder and letting him do all the shooting isn't so bad now, huh, Dax?
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  • From ANON - AlphaOmegaPsi on June 07, 2008
    Oh, wow, that was awesome. I kept expecting Jak to show up and rescue him, but that was so much better. I wonder how Daxter will deal with killing someone? Can't wait for an update, do it soon please!
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  • From ANON - AlphaOmegaPsi on May 18, 2008
    Gah, cliffhanger of doom!! O.o You fiend!

    But woot! for the kissing! ^o^ Who knew gun training could be so sexy? Too bad it didn't end very well. I hope Daxter's okay.
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  • From yeahjesse on May 16, 2008
    ;_; What happened to Daxxie...? *is worried sick*

    And after such a sexy and wonderful moment!
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  • From ANON - random hyper person on May 16, 2008
    I LOVED chapter 7 the akward kiss had me reading the page so fast .....and then i got to THE EVIL CLIFF HANGER!!!!!!!
    Darn You!!!!
    with your amazing (i think i spellrd that wrong.. o well) writing skills!
    and your awesome stories
    and last but not least your EVIL CHIFF HANGERS!!!

    ps -if you need help forcing your muse into submission chains and hand cuffs usually work :O hehehehehe :p
    pss -please ,please ,please have some more action in the next chapter- like each chapter from now Jak and Daxter go a little farther out of just friends into something else *cough**cough-penetration-cough* :D

    cant wait for chapter 8!!!!!!
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