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Reviews for Ming's 1000 Years of Ecstacy

By : Durandal
  • From WotanAnubis on June 13, 2008
    As a simple smut piece, this fic does its job. I must admit, it's not exactly for me. I prefer the characters to stay vaguely in-character even in the most plotless of porn pieces and the typical pr0n dialogue really only makes me laugh.

    There are also a few technical problems here. Your fic is mostly in the present tense, but it slips into the past tense here and there. You should pay close attention to that to make sure it doesn't happen again. Also, when a different person is going to speak, the dialogue must start on a new line.

    As a final note, the title of the fic proclaims that it is, or is going to be, all about Ming's sexual escapades for an entire millenium. As such, I believe that question mark behind 'To Be Continued...' doesn't really have a place there. ;)
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