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Reviews for Naesala/Sanaki

By : dark112
  • From ANON - Cyberchao X on October 01, 2008
    Hmmm...since a Branded is essentially human, would a Laguz lose their powers for mating with a Branded? I would imagine so. An interesting debate. I should bring it up at FEPlanet.
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  • From MiniNephthys on March 25, 2008
    Wow, this is a -lot- better than I was expecting! And for my favorite pairing too~ I had to register just to tell you how much I liked this.

    The characterization was spot on. I have a few issues with the way you divide paragraphs, but I've no complaints about the writing itself. As for the sex, I don't think you have many problems there, heehee~

    The only real advice I have to give is that a) a title would be nice, and more likely to attract readers and b) while 'petit' is a word, the word usually used to describe women is 'petite'.

    Overall, it's an excellent piece of work, especially given that it's your second. I look forward to seeing what else you write!
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