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Reviews for Utopia

By : RockgirlX
  • From ArmagideonTime on June 26, 2008
    Nice story in total. I thoroughly enjoyed reading my way through several games and plot points! Great storytelling, great OCs, and just a great tale for anyone who's a fan of Mega Man X...with some sexiness thrown in there for good measure. I recommend this story to anyone reading this review. It's good times plus X.
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  • From ArmagideonTime on June 22, 2008
    Over the course of 12 Chapters, this story has REALLY developed! You're tying in all these stories beautifully and tastefully. The whole Reploid marriage thing? Nice take on the state of marriage in our own time. As for everything else, I'm loving it. Please keep this up. I can't stress enough how well you pull off multiple plots and somehow keep a good story flowing. I mean the cliffhanger at Ch. 12's end is crazy! Like a million things about to explode at once! I anticipate good things in the next chapter. You're awexome.
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  • From ANON - Ichallenge on June 14, 2008
    A few new chapters up at last (it's been a while). Anyway, comments this time:
    1. The new chapters all seem rather rushed to me. They're good, but I belive they could've been a lot better.
    2. Iris died?! I know she did in X4, but I was really hoping that you'd let her live... Honestly, ZeroxIris was one of my favorites (though I now enjoy ZeroxLayer)
    3. The story seems to be focusing purely on retelling the events in the games. It's slowly becoming less entertaining for me... Sadly...
    I hope the story continues
    on a better path
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  • From ANON - Ichallenge on May 29, 2008
    Yeah, it's really me (no time to log in). Anyway, the story really is looking good so far. Your writing skills are pretty good too (although there are some parts where you could improve on). I also commend you for updating this regularly, but I must ask you: how long do you intend to make this story? And one last thing: you never really mentioned the pairings (although it is obvious that JadexKate is one)
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  • From ArmagideonTime on May 14, 2008
    Another Chapter in the books(Chapter 2), and you still keep it up. Good establishing of the OC, Jade. And a very intense fight with Blizzard Buffalo! You keep this up and I may have to call up Capcom for the rights to your book, hehehe. Let the journey continue!!
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  • From ArmagideonTime on May 14, 2008
    Holy cripes, this is easily your best work so far. Every paragraph kept me wanting to read more! I already hunger for Chapter 2! I'm also totally geeking out on the canonality(real word?) of its plotline with Maoh The Giant. I love that stuff. The action is super intense, the super secret characters keep me wondering who they are, and X and Zero are very believable in this stage of their lives. Please, for the love of all that is awexome, keep...it...up!
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