Click Here!

Reviews for We Love You Link!

By : HondoOokami
  • From ANON - fate on March 30, 2014
    good history hope to see more and you should include illia, but ill like to keep link, i dont like the rest XD of guys
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2013
    This is absolutely amazing! I really want to compliment two things done incredibly well. The first is that your actions scenes -Link's battle in the caverns and Quill's fight against the thieves- are very well paced; you manage to fit in enough imagery to make it real while keeping a quick enough pace to make it exciting. The second part I have seen done well even more rarely: you keep the sexuality romantic and loving even when the by-most-accounts-more-deviant actions are taking place. Especially in the case of multiple lovers I don't think I've ever seen sex still convey the intimacy and passion of lovemaking. This work is absolutely excellent and I cannot wait to read more.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - cm24 on June 08, 2013
    'Four sensational hours and a variety of 66 positions later...'

    That's rather dangerous and physically straining for Agitha considering it was her first time.
    Report Review

  • From karlminion on February 03, 2012
    A bit long-winded, but otherwise very cool.

    Also you need to reformat all your earlier chapters.
    Report Review

  • From Leeslane on February 03, 2012
    The latest chapter seems good, but the formatting for the previous ones is so condensed that I honestly can't read them. I'd suggest that you try to get them back up reformatted. Also the puppy-Link thing could have been expanded into good roleplaying for the two (or three) of them. Consider it for the next chapter?
    Report Review

  • From TheColeTrain on May 10, 2011
    God I love this movie
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Unhallow on July 02, 2010
    Write more, I'm curious to see what happens next. You've got a great style--very evocative--and the fetishism is well done. Keep it up!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - zagan on March 07, 2010
    It's good to know that the story isn't abandonned, I can't wait for the big event.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - speed bag on May 19, 2009
    yeh i love it, you dont see midna enough.
    Report Review

  • From Streti on May 02, 2009
    Hondo, it could be that I'm misinterpreting what you mean by "ten rounds", but the troubled indication is that Link is like a young teen boy, so sensitive that he climaxes from very short provocation, and worse, several times in a very short time without even building up stamina to last longer on successive turns. It brings to mind an inexperienced, uncontrolled teenager, even if a tireless and very eager one. But whether you want to make this sort of an impression, I'm not sure.

    As for the 'shooting blanks' question, that was specifically to seek your interpretation of what happened and what exactly does that 'ten rounds' mean. A frank question maybe, but specifically to ask about your own impression of the scene in the story. If you want to give the impression of Link as an inexperienced yet highly enthusiastic teenager, there is no problem with that, it just needs to be brought out better to avoid a clash as the rest of the story seems to set different expectations.
    Report Review

  • From Streti on April 11, 2009
    Holy inoffense, anon! Maybe I should go around "criticizing" more stories to get more critique of my own! I assume you are one of the many who always reads the latest "generic babble" and racks up the hits but doesn't bother to review...

    I leave it to Ookami to reply to my observation or not, you need not rush to the defense of the simplest prod. You have a limited view of reviews.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on April 11, 2009
    i love it when a guy who writes the same generic babble over and over criticizes an author who has talent. i'm sure hondo is glad for your important feedback streti.

    this fic is super btw, the sex is good and not just "wham bam thank you maam" over and over again, theres some actual direction instead of it just being a fuckfest, its written pretty good...all it needs now is a few exclusive girl-girl scenes with human midna and zelda and/or agitha and it shall be perfect!
    Report Review

  • From Streti on April 10, 2009
    "It should have been one more round, but it spanned to ten. After Link treated Midna to the most enjoyable hour in her entire life..."

    Ten rounds, and just one hour? That doesn't put Link in very admirable light, actually. Was he shooting blanks most of the time?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - wein on April 10, 2009
    this was worth the wait.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Josh Foland on January 28, 2009
    Please, Please, Please continue this story, this is one of the better Zelda stories on this site and it's driving me nuts that you haven't at least updated it in so long. Please continue working on this story. Thanks.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!