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Reviews for Play Time

By : cheat
  • From WotanAnubis on July 08, 2008
    Again, a solid sex scene. But, again, not much else.

    Also, on the nitpick-y front, I'd suggest you don't refer to Hana's strap-on as her cock all the time. For one thing, there are other words you can use for penis simply for the sake of variety and for another, an incautious reader might think this is a dickgirl fic when you don't intend it to be.
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