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Reviews for A Place To Stay

By : yunakitty
  • From on February 02, 2009
    love it love it LOVE IT! jsut read chap 29 my only problem with it now is that you havent introduced a child yet always happens in game and it be nice to see here to cliif and claires kid that is
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  • From on February 02, 2009
    jsut read cahpter ten and YA FERGOT TEH BLUE FEATHER! lol its no biggie but i love my HM games i own almost all of them ds gba gamcube lol all of em hehe but i have no quames with it tis a beautiful story i absoulutly love it
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  • From on February 02, 2009
    just took the time to read your profile and yes i do see why they cally ou the lemon queen that was a very beaufitul lemon lol however the normal chapters that cover the day to day things seem to be a little rough and i was wondering if youd want some help with those id beta for you or give you my input on a chapter if you want heres my e-mail mike_compeau@hotmail.com id realy like to help but yea i dont review this much usaly but this whole section is lacking on reveiws so ill put mine in lol anything but yaoi that is lol
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  • From on February 02, 2009
    right on chap five now a bit short on the chapters i dont mind tis good n all however i sugest make em longer 26 chapters caught my eye but if they were a few paragraphs shorter id leave thats what i hate next to PWP is many chapters to get your atention adn then 6 paragraph chapters but tis okay yours aint bad and besides i might be spoiled reading 10k word fics lol however i like the bit about anns cooking lol anoutehr sugestion put a little more into chapters not only to amke em longer but mroe intersting
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  • From on February 02, 2009
    right i like it pretty good story so far only jsut read the first chapter tho but still i like it none of the PWP i see a lot lateley only the second hm fic i read but i like it ill tell you what i think evry 5 chaps or so i right like 5 reviews but i say a lot lol
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