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Reviews for Evil within the Heart

By : toonmissy
  • From ANON - Milos on June 28, 2015
    And just like that I hate you.
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  • From Linktydraad on April 29, 2009
    oh, and even if you are evil. Killing your childhood friend for no reason is not cool
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  • From Linktydraad on April 29, 2009
    I don't think Ganondorf being 10 inches is an exaggeration oh is body part, that would be normal since you said they not humans. Just because the average human penis is tiny, doesn't mean the average Hylian and Gerudo penis is small. Making them larger then a human penis, in the 8 inch and above category is fine and encouraged. not making tiny 7 inchers.
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  • From Pizzasnack on January 04, 2009
    WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY ;_;!
    no i know why. forget it. u_u
    BUT!!!! damn it sheik!
    sorry I'm overwhelmed >_0 dunno what to think!!!! XD t'was a good story though, but DAMN U SHEIK U_U
    stories should NEVAH finish ¬¬*shake fist*
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  • From Pizzasnack on December 17, 2008
    WOOT! a new chapter :D
    I liked it a lot, it seems flu can't stop you :O
    and i really liked your version of dark link :) and his naaame ! it's more original than "dark" and "dark link"! Why would someone call his child like that anyway ? I mean... if the character is a puppet of ganondorf,a creature, link's "dark form", okay. but a real being that came out of a womb or something O_ô come awn.

    ANYWAY :) your chapter made me happeh 8D as always~ I'm eager to read what happens next since sheik made a re-appearance!
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  • From Finnel on December 10, 2008
    lol your penis rant had me in fits... though i blame the flu meds i'm on... (the flu sucks...)
    yay! you go ganondorf! the whole idea of link being top... its just too funny, theres like a foot+ worth of height differ!
    with dark or shiek its fine...
    looking forward to the next chapter!


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  • From Pizzasnack on December 10, 2008
    oh my, now i know a little bit of your sexual life :O
    but you,re right about authors exaggerating penises, it has no sense at all >_0 the guy/girl would be torn damn it XD most of the time it's their first time XD! anyway ! I'm happy Ganondorf doesn't have a horse dick 8D
    and im f*cking happy you made ganondorf seme ! XD YAY!!!!! ganondorf will rule the world by f*cking link 8D "how did you conquer this contry?" " by sex" , im sure there must me a hentai about this.
    ANYWAY!
    GREAT CHAPPIE 8D
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  • From Pizzasnack on December 06, 2008
    like i said before : the raping scene was really hard to imagine XD
    hmmm...but surely roles will be reversed >D since ganondorf's a titan. a wizard titan. he can face link im sure of that >D
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  • From Pizzasnack on December 04, 2008
    oh my, we're sick together XD!
    i didn't think link would kill zelda :O well not in that context at least!
    and I have difficulties to imagine ganondorf, mega-muscles-man, being raped by link, muscled but not as much XD
    anyway XD we'll see what you'll come up with 8D I'm sure it'll be INTERESTING *heart* 8D


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  • From Finnel on December 04, 2008
    awww, i hope you feel better soon!
    yay! go link! it'd be nice to c more of shiek and dark link... but ganondorf is yummy!

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  • From toonmissy on December 03, 2008
    You guys really do want this next chapter, I'll have to start writing it. Don't worry! Dark Link will make a come back, I'm just deciding what I want Link to do to him.
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  • From Pizzasnack on December 03, 2008
    be even more honored, we're two reviewing! better than nothing 8D much more shall vanquish their shyness XD!
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  • From Finnel on December 03, 2008
    keep going! i wanna c what happens with link! ...what ever became of dark link... thats the only thing on my mind...
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  • From toonmissy on November 26, 2008
    Actually I am honoured! The only reason that story is being updated so quickly is because I keep thinking of the next chapter quite quickly. I see everyone reading it (111 hits while writing this) but no one seems to enjoy reviewing. I like to read the reviews I get because then if they have constructive criticism, I can make changes in the story where they are needed.

    Thanks for Reviewing Pizzasnack!
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  • From Pizzasnack on November 25, 2008
    Bah! created an account just for the sake of keeping you writing your great story :O ( YOU SHOULD FEEL HONORED LOL)
    so keep your great work 'cause i've reviewed ( just kidding, but still, keep your good work, i want to know what happens next, you're one of the rare writers on this website that gives sign of life~ so you're kind of unique XD!)
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