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Reviews for Princesses of the Night

By : Nelogenazea
  • From RogueHippie on December 05, 2010
    I like where this is going. Bit disappointed at the lack of Amy and Hilde action, but I'll wait patiently. Can't rush perfection.
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  • From Setie on June 17, 2009
    I am liking what I have read. Plot? Check. Characters being laid out? Check. You taken characters we don't know much about and give some spark. While characters like Hilde you have stayed true to character. But have them go through change.

    I am eagerly looking for more.
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  • From thinkingofaname on February 23, 2009
    Great story ... maybe a bit too much? I was a expecting a bit more um ... "action" for four chapters, but if you are really into shaping the story that's fine too. Did you get those servants name from the game? I don't remember them in-game, it felt a bit odd when you place so much emphasis on them. Making a good SC fiction isn't easy, there really isn't much to the story in SC4, but you did a great job so far, look forward to your next chapter.

    By the way, your Amy seems a bit too "nice", she should be a bit more dismissive and apathetic. I think your Hilde is right on the mark.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2009
    Hey, it's Tuna. Well, you asked for a review, I'm here to deliver. As I've stated before, I absolutely adore the description you're pouring into this fic. Sure, outfit description is, as you say, lacking, but in comparison to the detail you've put elsewhere, that's insignificant. I think that adding Raphael's servants from the game is a good idea, it gives us an opportunity to see what they might have been like. I would say you're being fairly accurate in terms of character, and that this is easily shaping up to be a reasonable pairing. There are occasional lapses and errors in grammar, but there aren't many, and I have seen much, much, MUCH worse. So far, nothing but good things from me. If this "premiere" of yours is what I think it is, then I'll soon get to see the most important part. I have faith in you, though.

    I am curious, though. If you're still planning on bringing in Talim later, I wonder how you plan to do so. That, however, is just curiousity on my part. Don't take it as either a negative or positive comment.
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