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Reviews for Fire Emblem: Sacred Stones - Ephraim's Vice

By : Streti
  • From ANON - reader123 on June 05, 2013
    Hey,
    I've lurked this story long enough. I gotta come out and tell you how much I love it! I've read it at lease 20 times, and I love it just as much every time!

    It really is a brilliant story, everything about it. It builds upon a great obvious shipping. You capture Ephraim's lust and Eirika's beauty very accurately. I have also read Eirika's Virtue which was equally well done.

    I would strongly encourage you to write more of these two! You do a very good job.
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  • From Streti on July 31, 2009
    Karl, thanks, but currently I have no plans to update the story on AFF. Check my Twitter for updates on my stories, for the eventual continuation.
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  • From karlminion on July 27, 2009
    All your stories are excellent examples of writing, but this is a particular favorite of mine, since incest fics are among the niches I look for and Ephraim and Eirika are so very incest-able.

    I do hope, though, that you'll be updating on this site, as well?
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  • From OmegaX on July 10, 2009
    Heh, that's so tempting! I'm eagerly awaiting the new chapter, even more so with the revelation we now get, heheh
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  • From ANON - jason on July 01, 2009
    yo
    nice, keep on writing
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  • From Streti on June 28, 2009
    Feel free to read the full version at http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1575813?rfrid=streti

    This version will not be published on AFF for now.
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  • From Lubegirl88 on June 28, 2009
    I'm dissappointed in chapter five. The length for the chapter is inconsistant with the others, and there, I feel like it makes this lack intensity and depth. You should've waited and added the next chapter to this one.
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  • From OmegaX on June 22, 2009
    You know where I stand on this, but with any luck, the chapter will inspire people to REVIEW for once, instead of just hiding!

    Anyway, I hope we get the happy ending the two deserve!
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  • From ANON - shy reviewer on May 29, 2009
    I really, really like this one. His overwhelming lust is palpable throughout, and very, very hot. His descent into depravity is very exciting. I always love your stuff, but this is quickly becoming a favorite!
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  • From OmegaX on May 28, 2009
    And here is the missing Chapter 4! As I mentioned in my earlier review of this chapter, I loved seeing just how bad Ephraim is slipping into depravity. I'm thinking maybe two more chapters until the deed is fully done?
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  • From ANON - tscecest on April 30, 2009
    Huh. It's funny what you notice after a second readthrough: I didn't realize that Eirika was awake during Ephraim's second visit unitl I reread it.
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  • From Streti on April 25, 2009
    And out of the few hundred viewers during that time and after, you were still the only one that reviewed. If you want to read the fourth chapter again, or be notified in case I continue the story, feel free to contact me at thestreti@gmail.com.
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  • From OmegaX on April 25, 2009
    I apologize for forgetting to review Chapter 4, I had people over when you posted it, and sadly never got around to posting it before you took it down, or it got removed, or whatever.

    Thus, this is more for that chapter than this, which I believe I've reviewed.


    The chapter was awesome in it's own right. More than just Ephraim's normal vices, he's actually moving towards penetration. I still can't wait for him to finish the dead, so to speak. Perhaps Eirika enjoying the act?
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on April 02, 2009
    An excellent story meriting nothing but the finest of reviews and one's most fervent hopes of its continuation.
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  • From OmegaX on April 02, 2009
    And Ephraim sinks deeper into depravity!

    My current guess is in three more chapters, if that, for him fully caving in
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