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By : VelvetMace
  • From ANON - Mae on August 26, 2014
    Do you have any more Dax/Jak stories?
    Loved this!!!!!
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  • From Amaronith on December 28, 2010
    I can't believe I haven't reviewed this fic. This has to be one of my favorite fics of all time. It's heart breaking in some places and utterly wonderful and I just want to hug everyone, and I'm glad it worked out for Daxter in the end, because he deserves it.
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  • From ANON - Sleepy-Phantom on October 15, 2009
    I don't care how angst this fic got, it was just so personal and deep. You could really see how Dax was having issues giving up the 'him' for the 'them', but then again, doesn't everyone have some of that problem when deciding to enter a deep relationship? I've been reading a lot of Jak and Dax fanfictions lately, and I have to say yours is definatley one of my favorites. Do you have any others for Jak and Daxter? I know I would enjoy them with how much I couldn't stop myself from reading this one to the end. The only thing that slightly bothered me was how Dax was literally like Jelly to any and all whims a-la-Jak. But, eh, whatever. I guess I could see how that would work since they were so close initially- Maybe something to do with the mentality of being a pet loyal to its master no matter what?-and through their trials they just kept on getting that much closer to wanting to be everything to one another. Great job on this story (:))
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  • From darkaura204 on August 25, 2009
    Hey, awesome story. Say, is it possible for you to email me the original lemon between Jak and Daxter? I would really appreciate it. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - LightFaerie on June 05, 2009
    I absolutely love this fic. Its deep and emotional and very well-written. I stayed up until one in the morning reading through it, and it was really worth it. You definately have a knack for this sort of thing.
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  • From Kaybrianna on May 18, 2009
    Well congradulations, job well done! This was a fantastic story, even with the depressing middle part, haha! I hope you decide to write more Jak and Daxter, you have a real knack for it. Maybe a Jak centric story next time? Change of pace, you know? Hopefully see you later!
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  • From ANON - The Lazy Snake on May 17, 2009
    I have to say, this story is really amazing. The characters are all kept in character and believable, the pace is slow enough to be realistic and yet quick enough that the reader doesn't get bored, and everything is wrapped up into a neat little package. I've enjoyed this story immensely. Thank you for writing it.
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  • From ANON - random hyper person on May 11, 2009
    LOL I went on here just to make sure I wasn't missing anything... XD

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  • From ANON - La' wrenn on May 09, 2009
    This story makes me want to eat trifle... with my hands.

    I can't beleive how utterly... Tense and deppressing your story is.. and yet I love it, poor Daxter, this really does show the more realistic side of J&D rather than the fluffy lovely yaoi stories where they fall in love and fuck. It's a lot less comical than the games also, which just adds perfectly to the whole thing. I love the fact you made the 'precursors' liars, I mean seriously... ottsel gods? I look forward to reading the final chapters.

    7/10
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  • From Kaybrianna on May 05, 2009
    Uh oh, I sense regret... Haha, another great chapter, as always! I feel so bad for Dax, knowing he has no real choice in life, though he doesn't seem to want it any other way. I can't to find out how this changes the dinamics of their relationship. Will Dax be so overcome by guilt and regret he leaves? Does he regret it? Haha, will Jak become a clingy, domestic boyfriend and visit Dax at work and make him lunches? Maybe wear an apron? Haha, that'd be a sight... Well, as always, I'm eagerly awaiting your next update!

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  • From wanderingaddict on May 05, 2009
    wow! two new chapters! and as for the 'rush' thing, it just seems like sometimes you maybe jump a step or two in either the story or character's thinking. it's tiny! it's definitely very tiny! but it's still a half-step ahead.

    for me at least. and it might jsut be me. like I wonder about the ride back from the precursor ruin that day. or how Dax has adjusted beside/behind Jak etc. just little thoughts that have obviously been dealt with in the story, but not before us, the reader.

    that's not to say I'm trying to criticize! just if you were curious/value feedback at all. I thoroughly enjoy reading this story, it's a lot of fun! there are definite funny moments and I really enjoy reading about the world as you flesh it out for us as well.

    yeah. good stuff.
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  • From sillyneko345 on May 04, 2009
    Either Torn is really, REALLY perceptive... or he took a wild stab and got it right. Oh man, that's funny!
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  • From Kaybrianna on May 03, 2009
    HAHAHA! I love you! I was laughing so hard I woke my sister up! Can you imagine?! Well, of course you can, you wrote it, but damn! I would be so freaking horrified! Haha, wow, that was great. That's one hell of a twist, kudos for originality, there. Now I'm all hyped up and craving the next chapter, curse you! I can NOT wait for the next update! Until next time!
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  • From ANON - spoonerism on May 01, 2009
    Brilliant chapter, I like the way this is moving along and how you have captured Dax, genius. Keep it up :D
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  • From ANON - Kayla on April 22, 2009
    Gaah! please continue! its getting really interesting.
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